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This is so heartbreaking and so realistic at the same time. I can see all of that happening quite clearly. Your characters are acting perfectly in character and I really admire that you're writing them that way. Looking forward to more.

This chapter had me making the sign of the cross and also crying by the end of it. Torvasi indeed. =*) I assume the book the boy had in Azkaban was the Bible? To me, a Christian, that would keep me from going mad in a place like that too. <3

So I guess my review didn't send (the screen went white so if you got it then sorry for a second) but I just wanted to say I really liked your song (thought I couldn't hear some of the words probably because my speakers are shite) I liked the chapter very much and feel that the bond between the two is strengthened now; but what happened with Harry--and why didn't she confess she didn't sleep with Blaise (surely her guild would have made her at least admit it after being appalled by his suggestion? I am in need of more information lol. On a side note--any thought into Hermione trying to find a way to get Narsissa out early? (sorry that's been going through my mind since Draco said it happened because someone spoke up about the torture. Anyway, can't wait to read more!

It's always so hard to watch Harry fall apart. Usually I try to give him some type of rehab to help fix him but I do like to see him get aggressive...I tend to ship Harmony a lot. Glad he left though, didn't know if he was gonna kiss her or punch her. YAY! Draco is gonna help! Emotional roller coaster! Thank goodness for that dividing line, otherwise I'm quite sure Draco would have quite enjoyed ignoring Hermione for the rest of his life.

I like where this is heading.
Draco
Hermione
Ha ha ha!
*wicked smile*

Harry
*sigh*
I'm not loyal. Now, much more than Teodora or Hermione, I think that Draco is my favourite character as well as

I loved this chapter. The scene with Harry... I thought it was going to make the story darker. Like maybe he was going to hurt her way worse than he did. Then, to have Draco sobbing in her misery was just... (sigh) so moving. Anyway, the song was beautiful! You have a lovely voice! Vlog responses would be interesting... I hope you do them!

Me again. My ff.net ID is SailorTerra1. I've enabled private messages

Alright I know i have said it before, but seriously this time it is gonna be short.

The scenes with Harry were heartbreaking. If the books had been a bit darker THIS is the Harry I would have expected to see come out of the war, I mean he has been tortured, had to listen to his best friend get tortured and then watch as one by one watch his loved ones die, and to top it all off he has died himself, I mean he got better but still. The boy is so obviously broken and doesn't know how to handle it and having a madman's soul latched onto you for over 15 years and messing with your head wouldn't help matters. He just want's to go back or run away to a simpler time and place where it was just him,Ron and Hermione and things actually made sense and the world wasn't looking at them to fix all of it's problems. It was also the perfect callback to the scene in Deathly Hallows where Hermione, at the end of her rope, suggested that they just forget about everything, the war, the people and just go somewhere and quote "grow old". Was sad to see Hermione realize just how broken her original tovarasi are at this point. This story honestly feels more realistic than the original story simply because in canon, they won the big fight and then lived happily ever after. Reality is so much more like this story. Here you have shown the after effects of being in the thick of a bloody war and managing to survive it but only after almost losing everything you hold dear. It also brings up another fact, these kids probably did not expect to survive the fight and if they did, had absolutely no idea what to do next. It's just like your Hermione said, "What use was a war hero in peace time?".

(Fuck!!! and I said this was gonna be a short one, sorry lol)

Looks like our little Lioness is learning a few new tricks and she now has the help of someone who she wouldn't feel all to guilty about testing them on. And malfoy-sigh-:

Hi so sorry for the late review I'm like three chapters late, but I'm glad that I'm glad to be reviewing again. I was sick for the last couple of days and I'm still feeling sluggish, but I have to say I'm liking the direction of the story, wow harry was very dark and I'm feeling so sick but I'm cutting this review short. I love these chapters though and I'm loving it too.

Tori

Loved the new chapter. I do have a ff account, but I'll have to look it up. Haven't used it in ages. My email is moryen at yahoo dot com. Funny how I won't give my email to some of my family, but I feel perfectly comfortable sharing it here.