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I really didn't expect that you would keep isobel alive. I like how you are adding so many different angles to the story. How can hermione ever get together with Draco if her best friend has feelings for him!? I'm sure you'll help us get there ;) I can't wait for the moment when Hermione and Draco finally realize/reveal their feelings for each other. I'm working on my first story now and I'm quite intimidated by your creativity. It would be nice to pick your brain and learn more about how you come up with all these clever ideas. Im wondering if you have read the mortal instruments series? as the clary/jace relationship has a similiar dynamic and your writing style is similar to that author. If you are up for a challenge all of the fics written about that series arent of your caliber.And I am just amazed by authors that are so incredibly adept at building upon existing myths and building upon them to create modern fairy tales that in my opinion are just as good as the classics

I have been reading this story since the third chapter and must say that i love seeing the new updates. Thanks for a good chapter and i cant wait for the next.

Fabulous. I enjoy this story more and more with each chapter. Merry Christmas! I hope to read more soon!!!

Wow unbelievable cliffy! But thanks for the Christmas gift! Hope you're having a great holiday can't wait for the next update !!!

Bravo for the fast update, this was another feelgood chapter. Loved the eureka moment Hermione and Draco had about Teodora and the blood magic connection. Now I have to go back and skim a few of the chapters to see if you have dropped anymore hints and clues about possible future revelations lol. Everything you have written in this story serves a purpose and ya floored me with that reveal.

I love the pace your going at with Hermione and Draco. Most(i.e all) other DracoxHermione fics usually have them shacking up and doing the horizontal monster mash after only a few chapters and some sweet words exchanged with either no character development or perhaps instead character assassination. Here you keep them in character while giving them the necessary development one would expect to see in the post war setting.Cause lets be honest, in real life Draco would have to become a much better person than he was in canon for Hermione to give him the time of day, and not just fall for him for his looks( now i ain't gonna lie....i would climb upon him like a spider monkey does a tree if i was in her place.....ahem I mean..no homo) like A LOT of stories have. I also like how instead of having Hermione gushing and preening about how Draco MIGHT like-like her, you have her being understandably freaked the fuck out. Here is a guy who for the longest time has been "that douche at every school ever", the guy who was the first person to call her a mudblood, and now suddenly everyone thinks he has the hots for her and she just for the life of her, cannot understand why or even how to start dealing with it.

Also......did he just give her an orgasm......through touching hands/magic.... cause if so

-Gives Draco the highest of fives-

Also if so, that scene was very tastefully done.

Merry Christmas you magnificent bitch.

-Returns to slumber.......and waits-

haha sort of.
why would you even leave it at a cliff hanger?
dying to read more. D:
this story is fantastic though!

I know in my previous review a few chapters back, I mentioned that I love how you were doing a slow build up of Draco/Hermione. Am I allowed to take that back?
You don't do exceedingly long chapters and yet you're able to get so much character progression as well as plot progression into each of them. This story is just so brilliantly written. I adore it more than a mere review can express. Because you've written this so beautifully, I'm already dying to have some Draco/Hermione action. Even if Hermione freaks out about it and "takes it all back", I need something to desperately happen within the next chapter or two. My nerves are becoming absolutely frayed as I sit impatiently at the proverbial edge of my seat. Please! I beg of you! Allow something to happen. Especially after this chapter. You can't have built that up so wonderfully, allowing us to form fantastic salacious sexy thoughts of what was to come next only to hurt us by not having those salacious sexy thoughts unfold before us in the next chapter. You can't be that cruel. Can you?

I am so enthralled with this story however that I am at your mercy. You may twist and turn me into knots with these characters; disappoint and elate me, confuse me and devastate me; and I would come back, begging to read more.

Your willing literary follower. Lover of the climactic and anti-climactive spell you weave so beautifully,

dM
xoxo

Loving this!! Was so happy with I checked out to see if there had been an update and yes!! 3 chapters!! Your amazing, loving where the story is going maybe Malfoy and Hermione will get alittle frisky and she can releave some tension and work out some of her pain.. wink*wink* chapter 20 PLLLLLEASE!!

I still keep thinking of this story and where it will be going. I went back and reread the entire thing today, and am really getting ancy to read what happens next.

I have to say, there are many original aspects of your story that I am very happy with. The tovarasi, for one. It creates an interesting dynamic in the story and I'm starting to see how critical it is to those members.

Also, the Dividing lines, what inspired them (if you don't mind)? It's very interesting.

I also enjoy this silent trust that has been built between Hermione and Draco (silent until this chapter, that is, and I thought you made the transition beautifully).

And finally, the last part of this that I am very happy with is the twist to the story of Hermione and her parents. It was always implied she removed their memories against their will, but the extent and the description to where you have taken it is probably one of my favorite parts of this story. I'm really hoping that Draco will convince Hermione to visit her parents... perhaps as a way of moving on from Isobel?

Anyway, an early Christmas present would be much appreciated with an update! :D

Happy Holidays!
B

I've been enjoying your story very much and look forward to reading more. Keep up the GREAT work & Happy Holidays!!!!