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for Victim of the Fall

by PrettyDesdemona

person Cat
schedule December 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So I have figured out my problem with reviewing, it doesn't post if you do it on my kindle. Weird right? Anyway great as usual! Your character development is a breath of fresh air compared to some stories and it makes the story so much stronger. I can't believe I missed the hint of blood magic, then again it seems I'm not the only one. I can't decide if I want to go back and look for more clues or be surprised lol. Malfoy seems to really be progressing while staying his own semidouchebag self, I kept trying to imagine thinking of what magic would look like and all I could think of was an acid trip while surrounded by tiedye lol. Way to leave it on a cliff tho, can't wait to see how she reacts//what happens since I'm assuming they're still going to be under the effects for a bit. :)
person Carly
schedule December 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Merry Christmas! Thank you so much for this intense chapter! Sorry my reviews have been scarce but I have been keeping up. I don't think I've ever loved a story like I do this one! <3 Incredible!
schedule December 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You don't have to review any of my stories, I just wanted to let you know I absolutely LOVE this story soooooooooo much. You have such an amazing way of describing things. Love it!
person Sailor Sol
schedule December 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just read 18 and 19. Very well done, and very moving. Again, sounds like you have some personal experience there, or maybe secondhand experience. This is DEFINITELY one of the better stories I've read here, and it's at the top of my 'check for updates' list.
person Kain
schedule December 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
-Comes home from a Christmas party and decides to see if there are any updates-

-Notices that their and mentally prepares himself for more soul crushing sadness and then thinks that Hermione is only dreaming and has finally gone off the deep end................................to then see:

person Cat
schedule December 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Once again, great job. It's really progressing nicely. I'll be sure to keep a look out on the Narsissa front but for now I can't wait to see how Hermione handles all of this information at once after it fully sinks in. I have to admit I fully related to Hermione when she was praying to take on everyone elses pain so they could feel normal (I delt with some extreme medical situations) it seems to be the simple solution at the time rather than working through the muck of feelings and thoughts but it is extremely important to work through. I hope you show us what Draco said and more of his emotions, the glimpses are great and have so much potential! Happy Holidays
person aranel
schedule December 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you didn't have to kill anyone! That's simply awesome. I'm glad they talked, Hermione and Isobel. I doubt Hermione will say anything to Draco though...she is so stubborn.

There is still a fear in the back of my head that Harry is going to come back one day and really try to hurt her and she will be broken again. Of course that could lead to boots knocking with Draco so...I don't know...It wouldn't be so bad...I'm just scared of the place Harry is in right now.

Can't wait for the Christmas chapter! So glad you're awesome.
person Rolling14reader
schedule December 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is definitely one of the best DM/HG stories I've ever read. I've been on the tips of this story ever since you posted and dying when a day goes by that another chapter isn't up (I know it's dramatic). But that's a little bit how I feel. I can't wait for the next chapter.
person aranel
schedule December 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
that is what I'm talking about! me gusta! I'm keeping myself from getting really vulgar. love this chapter. can't wait for more.
person 2zen2
schedule December 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ok, officially obsessed with this story. Well, that's not the complete truth. I was obsessed with it by around chapter 3 or 4, but I think it's been brought to another level. I have rarely read fanfic dealing with PTSD in any fashion, let alone a realistic way. Most of those stories go very dark and use BDSM has the "cure all" for it. So, now that I've mentioned what this story isn't, let's talk about what it is. So very very good. The writing is stellar, the story is engaging and well thought-out, the characters are believable in and of themselves, and within the Potterverse. My only complaint would be that Luna (always a favorite of mine) is a bit underutilized. However, I officially love Isobel. And some writers use Luna and her abilities as convienient plot device, so I can see why you would avoid making her more of a central character. I cannot wait to see how Draco and Hermione's relationship progresses. At first I was torn between how you would deal with the PTSD AND the Bastet plot lines, but you've dealt with it beautifully. I'm in awe and cannot wait for the next chapter, and the one after that, and the one after that. This is one of those stories where I will not want it to end. Looking forward to the story continuing!