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for Victim of the Fall

by PrettyDesdemona

person SillyGreenEyes
schedule January 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I was bouncing in my seat when I saw your latest chapter up. The bouncy-ness increased and little girly squeals came pour out when I read the last bit of the chapter. YAY THEY KISSED! Which has left me with a smile that won't go away! I love reading your story! It's fabulous!
schedule January 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
HEHEHEHEHEH!!!!! YESSS!!!!!! THE KISSS IT FINALLY HAPPENED AND I LOOOOVED IT!!! This was such an amazing chapter!! I love the New years eve twist so awesome! AHH another chapter please!!! I can't wait to see what happens when they take the potion!! So excited please update soon!!!
person Melusine
schedule January 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm not going to lie, but I've been obsessively checking and refreshing the page to check on this story since the last update. I love this story and I love the way you're writing it and your characters. Also, I just sat here grinning like an idiot through the whole last part of the latest chapter. I'm probably going to read it again and have the same results. Looking forward to the next update!
person Dramine
schedule December 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I read this story in about 24 hours I just could not stop reading! and you also made me register (finally) so I could leave a review. It hit me on so many different levels and took me back to a very dark time in my life. It was therapeutic though reading through it thus far. Its amazing to me that I would have found such a strong well written writing on such a "Knockturn Alley" of the internet lol. There was one line Draco said that just broke me down, when he said that he testified against his father. Anyway, this some how brought some healing to me just knowing that someone else has gone through some intense pain and been able to come back to life.
person Andriela
schedule December 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'd like to offer you a well thought out and insightful review of your story - but as I just read everything in one go all I can really says is AHAHA! How amazing is this story? I've read a lot of fan fiction over the years but this one is by far my absolute favorite. I am a hopeless romantic and love to read Draco/Hermione fan fictions - but generally I find them to a little - well - unbelievable. I just kind of roll my eyes a little and just ignore things that I find to be out of character. At the same time I love the pairing and even with my eye rolls I still enjoy the heck out of them. Your story is facinating and I can't wait to read the next chapter. I'm intrigued with the blood magic and the slowly developing relationship between Hermione and Draco. I take great pleasure it how you are building relationship, it makes it seem more plausable. I usually don't read stories that aren't completed because, frankly, I hate waiting but I'm so glad that I read this one. You are a gifted and amazing writer and I can't wait to read the remainder of this story. I find it refreshing that you are taking an honest approach at the aftermath of the war and how it can leave people damaged. As someone who suffers from panic attacks myself I find how you are dealing with Hermione's to be truthful and not so over the top. Sometimes there just isn't enough oxygen in the world you know? :) If I had one complaint (and really - I don't) I wish that sometimes we could hear from Draco. It would be wonderful to hear this story from Draco's perspective. There are certain moments and I would just love to see through Draco. But honestly. BEST STORY EVER. I await your next chapter with great anticipation. :)
person Aranel
schedule December 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh hermione, she wouldn't be herself if she weren't so bloody difficult. I just love Draco so much right now. He is so patient and really in love. I hope that hermione can learn to forgive soon. Still crazy afraid of Harry though. I'm scared of Ron as well, they're like dark clouds in the corner waiting to soak everything!
person Jocat
schedule December 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
All I want is a tim tam right now! Great story really has me hooked!
person aisha
schedule December 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, it is the most well written post series I have ever read. I don't think I have been moved so much by a story in quite a long time. Love it and will stalk the next chapter with anticpation.
schedule December 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I freaking love this story!!! please update soon!
person ldeetz
schedule December 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I've been reading it straight since last night! I can hardly wait to see what happens next.