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First, I love this story! I cant wait to read the next chapter.
As for the last one (chapter 25), well, I just felt like crying at the of it or something like that. It just cant be... what is wrong??? No, no, no... someone has to help her... :)
Really good job. Makes me wonder whal will happen and as I said, I simply cant wait to read more!

I was concerned that as their relationship finally started to develop that Crazy Harry would show up and ruin it. One thing is for sure, whether she gets kidnapped to who knows where (hope not), gets raped (really hope not), or somehow gets out of this situation without any more harm done (my hope...pretty please!): Draco is going to feel like crap and probably feel very guilty for their last interaction. They both were at fault for allowing to part the way they did, but Draco will definitely be broken up during whatever mental and physical healing Hermione will need to go through. I'm interested to find out what direction you will end up going with Harry from here. As much as I like his character the way he was in the last chapter makes me want him broken, bleeding, and dying in some alley. Whether he is afflicted with some kind of dark residual magic from the war or is just plain crazy from it, Hermione better not let her old friendship trap her again. She was way too quick to forget their first odd/scary meeting.

That said, I love the story and your writing so far! I tend to like most Dramione fics that are well written, but very few of even those have the realism and care that yours does. Well done!

So kinda busy irl at the moment so once again despite what i said in my review on ff.net(which i think is the most awesomest of awesome reviews ever), this will be another short one.

Once again you hit the ball out of the park and it is very obvious that Harry is either possessed by something going by his line of

"I was the highest of priests".

or he is being influenced and subtly pushed in some way. Perhaps it has something to do with the Dividing lines or the books he has been reading. Or perhaps it has something to do with a lingering fragment of Voldemort's soul jacking with his mind. Kind of a last 'fuck you' failsafe put in place in the off chance that he lost. Hermione is seemingly never going to catch a break and if Harry is possessed then if/when he is saved, the revelation of what he has put her through is going to kill him. I will admit you caught me by surprise, i totally did not see things going this way, so kudos lol. I will also admit that while Harry(if it is still him) has absolutely no right to judge Hermione, what he feels towards Draco is not without reason. Literally from day one the kid showed Harry that he was a bit of a prick lol. I would just love to see those 2 in the same vicinity and have them (verbally) tear into each other, calling the other one out on their shit.

Now while this is not the end all void bringing review that i promised, rest assure that it is coming, and once it does arrive, pray to whatever deity you believe in because none will be spared. I.WILL.BREAK.THE.INTERNET and your tastebuds(Hellsing Ultimate episode 9 ending theme "Scars" starts up in the background)

AHHH where is Draco??!! why does'nt her friends feel that shes in danger the way they did when Isobel was trying to kill herself??!! I don't like Harry anymore...that's it...kill him! So either Voldemort still lives within him or He's off his rocker! Which one...or both?

PLEASE UPDATE AS SOOMN AS YOU CAN!!!!

O Prancing children crumpled dances
Blood be swift and heart be true
O Swirling skies and warping tides
Let me bend you from light
O Children dream and drown in nightmares
I sit in wait for you my children
To come back to darkness

O harry let us be one again...

Whoa! where the heck did that come from. Yes your favorite review has been silent waiting to review waiting for the moment when everything would make sense and still I review with more questions. Why won't she call upon the divine line. Or her friends, did her filters get broken again, will her friends come back with surprise. I mean fucking nice chapter though, I mean harry is a victim of the war so is the rest of them but he more than others because of the killing curse, maybe being brought back one to many times really does mess with your soul. And where the fuck is Draco, he should fucking man up and come see his girl! And the plot thickens!!!!! My head is everywhere my mind is a buzz with questions, and little answers. But I know this for sure it won't end well for herms...

So first I spent the last, I don't know week, moping about lack of updates, so I decided to read your reviews, and behold! You had updated on ff.net!! So I devoured those and then moped some more, because I'm fantastically impatient like that... And then this chapter! In the middle of my morning! It was a long wait until lunch, but so worth it!

I'm pretty concerned about Harry, and I have a lot of questions, but I'd rather wait and see what comes of this in the next few chapters before I say anything. This broke my heart a lot, to see how far they both fell and that they both aren't that great at putting themselves back together again; but at least Hermione is really trying and getting somewhere.

Is it terrible that I either want the line to activate and help her somehow or just have Draco say screw her telling him to come back later and just break the door down and save the day and apologize for being a complete ass to her the other day?? And they can have another amazing kiss or more (I won't complain) to make up?

Anyway! I love it all and am really looking forward to the next chapter and hopefully some happier feels. :)

This is one of the best Dramione stories I have ever read. I really like that you were able to make their relationship realistic, with all the struggles they would have to work through. The dynamics with Harry are also very interesting and your portrayal of the characters fits them perfectly. Your original characters are so well built and interesting and fit right into Harry Potter's world. I am very impressed with you writing style ans story and I can't wait to read more.

AH! i feel as if its 2 steps forward and 4 steps back! DAMN HARRY POTTER! KILL HIM...okay okay i know that wouldn't help at all and i love him too much for him to croak. Hermione has to have SOME pull with the ministry though right? She is a war hero and HERMIONE FREAKEN GRANGER, she could probably get Narcissa free, i would like to see that happen. Poor Draco!

Huzzah!! Specially ordered humpinh just for me!! More!!
Oh gawd my big fear is there. Highly unstable Harry. Ain't nobody got time for that. I just know it would ruin her if he did something to her...I mean I would like it. I take my Harry like I take my coffee, black. But it would just break hermione. Oh my glob why couldn't she just talk to Draco baby?!? Always internalizing! Well, wouldn't like her any other way. Gotta say, I'm loving the way you're painting this post war universe. It's always hard to decide how to draw out that world after the war, for the sake of the story should they move on or should they be lost and for how long should they trudge through the mud. You're doing an epic job. Two chapters in one day! Thanks Santa!! I'll be good this year so...can I has more humping please?
Oh gawd I don't even wanna think about Ron...

When are you going to update?!?? it seems like its been ages!!