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for Victim of the Fall

by PrettyDesdemona

person Cat
schedule January 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
What the F. Is Voldyshorts part of Harry or is he just off his rocker? And why did the rest of them not feel what happened to Isabel she was mean they felt what happened to Isabel how could they not feel her being tortured or her fear and know something was wrong? Seriously tho open mouth insert foot with telling him about his cloak. This chapter felt like an episode of criminal minds which is totally my favorite show and now I'm gonna go watch an episode or three, but I really want to know what the group will do about this. What will Draco do/how will he react? Will she find a way to leave a clue? Will the blood she and Draco shared through the potions play a part? Why did Harry pick those books Gah post soon!
schedule January 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ok, let me start by saying sorry, I haven't reviewed in a long time. I have been reading, and I love the new chapters!
This whole dark side of Harry is wonderful. I always hate it in other stories when he's always sooo good, its boring to me. Its a huge relief that you are showing the growth of the characters so effectively. I am a teeny bit confused how close to the cannon you are keeping, though I'm sure you will be going into that soon. What I mean is, with Harry being so dark, is it that he is not fully rid of the horcrux? Is there still some of Voldemort within him?
The defense class seems to have slipped into the backround a bit, which is somewhat nice to me, not that I didn't like them, don't get me wrong, but Hermione seems to not need them as badly as she once did. So it's logical that you would not talk about them as much.
God, I'm trying really hard not to gush about it, but I think I may be coming off like I am.... so I'm just gonna stop trying to hide it.
Anyway, Isobel! What is she gonna do??? Oh, I like Isobel, she has been such a mysterious character to me. She went from nearly killing herself over Draco to being able to hide it? Or is she really over him? Has she noticed how distant Hermione is being?
And Ginny!!! Coming to the rescue? Maybe defending Hermione against Harry's insanity? Oh, how nice that would be...
I am so anxious for new chapters!! I hope you enjoyed the holidays!
person LadyChaos
schedule January 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I've caught up to chapter 25 I love your story still! Your absolutely amazing. I feel every emotion it seems.. I hate what happened with Hermione and Draco :(( Teall me you'll fix them peasssssse? :) I really don't like this Harry but I can totally see it happening with PTSD. It's very real. I can't see how she is going to get herself out of that situation but I hope she can find help for him, or at least be done with him once and for all so she can help herself!!! I wonder how Ginny is feeling through all of this... I know her and Hermiones friendship has been tough but I hope she is doing okay with how Harry has been acting.

I just hope Draco comes to the rescue *swoooon* :)

Keep up the good writing I can't wait for more!!
person Cat
schedule January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So I think I may hate Harry. Damn him lol. Hopefully he'll not be so glum soon because I really want Hermione to step back from herself and realize she can be happy even in a shitty situation. I will say what I said before-Hermione should somehow get Narcissa free; however, now its not just to help the plot with Draco but because Lucius is an ass who deserves a worse fate than rotting in Azkaban. I'm glad you liked my tiedye reference it would be amazingly awesome and super trippy to see your own magic-well if you had it which common would be amazing in and of itself. I feel so bad for Draco in all of this, he's really just trying to be there for her and shes too wrapped up in the bad. When he said Ron must have been a saint I wanted to slap him even though he didn't know how shite Ron is. He needs to find a way to knock some sense into her before she ends up in the mental ward. Can't wait to read what happens next!
person Siona
schedule January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update!
person Aranel
schedule January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes! Dark Harry. I should be scared but I'm kinda wishing for dubious consent that I know will never happen. Oh poor hermione, and the things she must live through in my mind. Now that you mention it, Draco was being a bit of an idiot. But I feel I understand him a bit more than hermione. Poor wee lamb is afraid of rejection. Just wanna smoosh him. Oh emotionally unstable Harry, how you rustle my jimmies. Gotta love him.
person FaeChild
schedule January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm not usually a big Dramione fan, but I think you just converted me. Because its not like all the other Dramione fics out there, with Hermione and Draco falling 'madly in love with each other' after only a couple of chapter. This is happening just the way it would in RL... The two being brought together by a mutual interest in something and then denying any feelings they might be beginning to have for each other and so on and so forth. I like that your fic doesn't have a lot of type-o's either, because even if the story was good that would have put me off. I really really really look forward to your next chapter, I can't wait to see how you bring them back together after this one!
person Kain
schedule January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I have not read the newest chapter yet as i have to go to work......but when i return....well you saw what i wrote on FF.net heheheheheheh >D.
person FaeChild
schedule January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so I posted my last review just seconds before you posted chapter 25, and now I have to review the new chapter, for obvious reasons. I was like 'wtf Harry?', and the whole 'not like Ginny's' thing. I think I actually get it. And WHAT THE HELL is wrong with her friends!!!! There is no way she sounds like she has a bug, they should have just broken the damned door down! But I guess that wouldn't help your story any, would it... I want so badly to see how Hermione gets out of this, I need Hermione to get out of this one! Poor poor Hermione...
person ConjurerOfCheapTricks
schedule January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm so in love with this story. Can't wait for the next chap! Glad you're back to civilization and posting regularly! :)