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January 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I was once told that I'm a master at masking my feelings and glossing over my own emotional needs, but damn is Hermione more like that than anything else I'm just glad she finally cried for her past and for herself. I wanted to slap Max for that scene I mean common Oh yeah I really dont mind blood status even tho I just spewed how she's not worthy. bologna. And how Hermione is angry the like eh mox nix. Like no, I'm sorry I get you're just coming to yourself again after a wee bit of a comatose state but seriously. Sorry....rant....anyway I'm excited to see how you'll answer my other questions and glad that Hermione is finally taking some time to work on herself internally and that it was Draco who made her see that she can't just gloss over the present with views of the past. She needs a good cry to clear her head and I mean common what better place to be than in Draco's lap, even if its just for comfort. Here's hoping it pushes them even further together, as long as he accepts that she really isn't mad at him. I just want to shake them both and make them see how stubborn they're being. I'm excited to see if you do have everyone together for the night its such a fun idea.
Oh and sorry for my dutchy side coming out (mox nix means it doesnt matter in pa dutch if you didn't know) but most stories don't get me that riled up.
Can't wait for more!
Oh and sorry for my dutchy side coming out (mox nix means it doesnt matter in pa dutch if you didn't know) but most stories don't get me that riled up.
Can't wait for more!
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January 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This chapter really touched me, hermione's depression quite mirrored my own recent depression. Grieving is sometimes really hard to do, to let go of something lost and truly move on in your life. It's not an easy task... Luckily, the the sickly in the head, sexual therapy works wonders so if we can get that tasty ball rolling. Oh my sweet broken Draco baby, can't wait to see him come apart. I wish I wasn't so impatient, really wanna enjoy chapters like this. I need to study this kind of character development for my own stories. Lovely work from you per usual. I am in love with how patient her friends are being with her. It does wonders for a person to be able to work through things and not be told "just get over it". Is it bad that I just don't care about how Ginny is feeling? I'm happy that she is being a good friend but I just can't bring myself to invest emotionally in Ginny. Such a strange character, I can never seem to fully understand her...
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January 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am glad Hermione was not mad at Draco. Sometimes it's good to analyse things just like she does. ;)
I like it that Draco can stay calm and say what he thinks and that he is looking out for Hermione. And I think it was kind of understandable he wouldn't forgive himself for the way he reacted....I don't know, it's just like him.
Oh, and poor Hermione! It must be awful to realize you lost your best friend. And what a way to lose him. I wonder what is wrong with Harry...look forward to reading what you will come up with. :)
Anyway, good chapter.
One more thing, I like it that you reply to reviews. It's nice of you.
I like it that Draco can stay calm and say what he thinks and that he is looking out for Hermione. And I think it was kind of understandable he wouldn't forgive himself for the way he reacted....I don't know, it's just like him.
Oh, and poor Hermione! It must be awful to realize you lost your best friend. And what a way to lose him. I wonder what is wrong with Harry...look forward to reading what you will come up with. :)
Anyway, good chapter.
One more thing, I like it that you reply to reviews. It's nice of you.
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January 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
go Hermione!! I love how real and believable your characters are . you never cease to wow me!
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January 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really should log in, but my laziness forbids it.
Which means you should be super complimented that it allowed me to review.
Wow, Max is such a hoe! For a second I thought she was implying Draco be with her. Then I was like
"Bitches be crazy!" And indeed they are. Maybe I'll get a Draco sized pillow and clutch it when I get
Depressed. It's good to see Hermoine is awake, I really hope she snaps out of the depression funk and
Kicks some serious ass. Also wondering about Isobel and her reaction to Hermoines and Dracos relationship.
I anticipate your next chapter.
If I was a pure blood and you were a mud blood, I'd totally still marry you!
-Ariisha
Which means you should be super complimented that it allowed me to review.
Wow, Max is such a hoe! For a second I thought she was implying Draco be with her. Then I was like
"Bitches be crazy!" And indeed they are. Maybe I'll get a Draco sized pillow and clutch it when I get
Depressed. It's good to see Hermoine is awake, I really hope she snaps out of the depression funk and
Kicks some serious ass. Also wondering about Isobel and her reaction to Hermoines and Dracos relationship.
I anticipate your next chapter.
If I was a pure blood and you were a mud blood, I'd totally still marry you!
-Ariisha
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January 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It was an excellent review. Well worded and full of awesomeness. I don't know why it showed up blank but I was tired and couldn't bother leaving another review.
TO re-cap though. I LOVE this story and as I am a dedicated lurker you should feel pretty special I left a review at all. I normally don't. Not because I don't like a story mind you but because I get horribly lazy. However if you keep writing I will keep reviewing. I do hope Draco forgives himself soon. I have already lol
TO re-cap though. I LOVE this story and as I am a dedicated lurker you should feel pretty special I left a review at all. I normally don't. Not because I don't like a story mind you but because I get horribly lazy. However if you keep writing I will keep reviewing. I do hope Draco forgives himself soon. I have already lol
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January 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really gotta quit reading this right after you post a chapter >.>.... Only because I'm stuck having to wait until the next one comes out to read more about Hermione.... Yay! Hermione's gonna be okay, though. That's a relief. Thank you for this chapter, I'm -patiently- awaiting the next one!!
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January 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I think that fanfics and OCs are so much better when you an use personal experience to fuel them. It's like the need that touch of reality in order to be more 3D. Thank you for the new chapter. I'm keeping my eyes open for your fic and any new chapters you post.
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January 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you cleared that whole thing up for us and in a way I wasn't thinking of! I want to slap Draco, I know you're hurting dude but the world does not revolve around you-then again you were taught that it does sooooooo....old habits must die hard. I can't wait to see how she reacts to that tidbit once she calms and digests everything.
Can I just say that I felt so bad for Ginny? Like way to crush the girl. I feel like something is bubbling with her and Blaise but I mean she loved/loves Harry and that must have been so harsh to hear, and how he acted to her? Goodness me I'd have wilted faster than a flower after a freeze. Though I love how she and Isobel went and made up her room, they really do love her even through all the shit (tho I feel like Isobel will be okay with this whole relationship its going to be so awkward for her to watch)
And Mcgonagall, I feel like though in shock she would have acted more like a momma lion than anything else-this is one of her favorite cubs so to speak attacked by another. Where are the claws? I don't think she would have really let them stay with just Hermione and Draco not for the whole sex thing but because she'd want more protection (other than the random guard)like she'd either demand at least one night in Hogwarts so she could check and recheck the wards (I mean how cool would it be to have the entire group sleep in the DA classroom for comfort and protection) or have like them stay with her just to keep her safe--even if she and Draco were the only ones in her room room atleast they had backup who they knew well enough and trusted.
Oh and wouldn't someone go check the forest of dean? to see if he decided to go there anyway or back to Godrics Hollow?
Just two questions then I'll stop my rant-I'm kidding three. So the elderwand is what he's using---is it voldyshorts or grindewald doing this because I can see it being grindewald since her flat is on the diving line. Also-what happened to Ron? Like I don't want him with Hermione but is he still kickin? What about Neville? It did say he went back right and just chose not to take the class?
Can I just say that I felt so bad for Ginny? Like way to crush the girl. I feel like something is bubbling with her and Blaise but I mean she loved/loves Harry and that must have been so harsh to hear, and how he acted to her? Goodness me I'd have wilted faster than a flower after a freeze. Though I love how she and Isobel went and made up her room, they really do love her even through all the shit (tho I feel like Isobel will be okay with this whole relationship its going to be so awkward for her to watch)
And Mcgonagall, I feel like though in shock she would have acted more like a momma lion than anything else-this is one of her favorite cubs so to speak attacked by another. Where are the claws? I don't think she would have really let them stay with just Hermione and Draco not for the whole sex thing but because she'd want more protection (other than the random guard)like she'd either demand at least one night in Hogwarts so she could check and recheck the wards (I mean how cool would it be to have the entire group sleep in the DA classroom for comfort and protection) or have like them stay with her just to keep her safe--even if she and Draco were the only ones in her room room atleast they had backup who they knew well enough and trusted.
Oh and wouldn't someone go check the forest of dean? to see if he decided to go there anyway or back to Godrics Hollow?
Just two questions then I'll stop my rant-I'm kidding three. So the elderwand is what he's using---is it voldyshorts or grindewald doing this because I can see it being grindewald since her flat is on the diving line. Also-what happened to Ron? Like I don't want him with Hermione but is he still kickin? What about Neville? It did say he went back right and just chose not to take the class?
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January 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
oh please put up the next chapter! this is the best story I have read in ages and its so unique. have to have more.I'm so addicted. Btw I'm not logged in, I'm not even sure what my name is on my account because I have one on my own and one with my best friend so not sure if you could even go d my page which is ok because my stories are so bad in comparison. you really are a fantastic writer.