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i hate you.
this has to be the wirst cliff hanger ever.
and if draco and hermione dont make up I think I might die.
this is a briliant story though.

I was not expecting the horcrux twist, but definitely good. I can't wait for the next chapter. Hopefully Ron can talk some sense into Hermione, and she stops being pigheaded in regards to Draco cause they're cute together.

Desdemona,

I have been perusing this site for nearly 8 years. I have never made an account, however, due to the fact that writing fanfiction consumed much of my teen years, and I want to publish my own book before I resume this line of creative outflow. Two days ago; approximately 34 hours ago actually, I came across your story. I greatly admire your story telling ability, your grasp of emotional depth in writing, your expansion of characters' psyche and your general grasp of grammar and spelling on the whole. I have, through the years, come to expect short, sweet, OOC, grammar and literary error ridden, depth-lacking, stories from most of the writers on this site, not all, and to be honest, it fulfills the purpose when I peruse once every 4 months or so, to give me a smile, or a chuckle and a sweet feeling of recaptured youth(though I suppose I should say pubescence, being only 21.) You, with your true to life character development, proclivity for the use of reverentially over reverently, the innate writer's sentimentality I sense in you, your wonderful story telling, your love of good music... You have made me laugh, and cry, and FEEL so much in the past day and a half that I have lost count. You have warmed me. Renewed my love of fanfiction. You have reminded me of parts of myself I had been missing.

Because of this, you have broken my deference to becoming a member of this site. I had to thank you. I had to praise you. As a life-long fan of Ani Difranco, I feel the only way to laud you with praise is in a way only a writer and a fan would appreciate. "You are a rare bird, the kind I wouldn't even mind writing in the margins of my books." I do hope you grasp my feelings through use of this particular song.

You have a gift. I do hope you use it for original fiction as well.


Graciously(and impatiently awaiting the next installment),
Delirious Muse

So, I've gotten completely addicted to this story. Your writing is fabulous. I introduced a friend to this story (she and I both devour books and loved the HP series) and she is now totally hooked as well! If you chose to write a story on your own and have it published, I would absolutely buy it!

I honestly laughed out loud when I read your response about Draco. Tho, to his credit at the end of this post I'd not have moved either after she said she needed to go to Ron. Your mind must be a wonderful place to come up with half off the stuff, though all I could think about with the attached magic was like a fake umbilical cord and I'm gonna say thats not what you were going for. Poor Hermione though not feeling his love for her, or understanding it if its there. But the thought of fucking while basically on a magical trippy experience sounds like a blast. As if Hermione didn't have enough going on now shes off to fight voldyshorts again, can you say huge distraction from helping herself?!?! I hope Draco decides to take a break from the jerk side for a bit and talk some sense into her.

Best HP story on the net at the moment. Lurv it. I had a feeling that Draco didn't love Hermione. He cares for her and he wants to love her but he's not in love with her. I don't hate him for it I just think that he's not able to be in love with anyone at the moment. Poor Harry, I hope Hermione can save him.

.............So here am, just chilling reading the new chapter, watching our little lion Hermione devour the sexy snake....when this comes across my eyes:

"Suddenly Draco didn

I'm not entirely sure exactly what I want to say, other than the fact that I feel the need to congratulate you on an amazing piece of writing. The story and the character development is engaging, and your flow has beautifully captivating 'ups and downs' - sorry for the poor phrasing, but I read your entire story in one go, and it's kept me up into the early hours. Hermione's quoting of Molly with "you are beautiful and kind and clever and you will be okay" did not go unnoticed and I thought it was a very clever way to show her character development as you're going. Lastly, omigod, Voldemort's possessed Harry~! I'm curious, if and when Voldemort begins to replenish his lost Horcruxes, will it just continue to split his own soul, or will it have some rather horrid and detrimental affects on Harry's own soul as well? Looking forward to finding out, every chapter you produce is a delight and I'll be sure to check out anything else you ever write.

This is too piggy back off of my last review for the new chapter. I had typed that everyone had assumed the worst about Harry without really looking outside the box too what might be wrong with him. It's like they always had an inkling in the back of there minds that he would go bad. Even the Auror's who at one time would have jumped through hoops lit aflame to get him to join them or even his own girlfriend who spent years crushing on him bad. And EVERYONE was telling Hermione things like:

"People change, Hermione"

"Potter is now a criminal, Hermione"

"He's not your best friend anymore, Hermione'

And she was on the edge of buying it. I understand that her Toravasi/teachers/and the Auror's were only looking out for her and all..........But outside of perhaps Minerva they know next to jack about the Trio's bond. Hell they know next to jack about Harry beyond the rumors and mystique. It is not something that could be defined as simply "friendship", All 3 have shown the willingness to die for the other with no regrets and the last time Harry was in danger of possession by Voldemort........It was thinking about Ron and Hermione that allowed him to fight back. If they had known Harry as well as she and Ron had they would have stopped for a moment and really considered whether something else was at work once the obvious theories did not pan out. Those 3 were at their happiest when they were together and once they broke apart, things start to go to hell. Ron's off globetrotting(damn ginger), Harry is locked away in his own body(his sexy sexy body........no homo) and Hermione( lets not try to kid ourselves.......Emma be one smoking babe) has no one to turn too who would truly understand the horror they went through trying to save the world. Draco is a close competitor for a fellow traumatized teen but at the end of the day he was kept relatively safe in comparison while the trio had to evade death on a daily bases. Despite being in the serpents den for a time, they were the serpents prey ALL the time.

Now rest assured, I still like Draco and adore the ensemble dark horse Isobel but his and the other Slytherins opinion of Harry are always going to be biased. They simply did not like each other and Harry is a big part of why they are now on the bottom of the social ladder and would be less inclined to think better of him despite their character development.

Oh my, voldy refuses to die. Oh Harry baby, he will never have a break will be?
I'm super excited that you are getting a trailer. I don't think any of the music I listen to would fit very well though. Maybe 'keep breathing' by Ingrid michealson.
Daddy issues are the main ingredient for great writers.
Hermione... How can you miss Ron!?! I guess he is what she knew and she didn't ever really grieve losing him. It was all very abrupt.
Can't wait for the next chapter, stuff is getting crazy.