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for What have You Done?

by slytherincailin

person delia cerrano
schedule May 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well that eyes of different colors thing is certainly unique. It will be great to find out how the veelas view baby Orin.
Hopefully they will feel good about him and be inclined to be helpful. Yeah, now that they figured things out pretty much by themselves!
person delia cerrano
schedule May 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! But I think there may be trouble coming from the Veela nest.
person delia cerrano
schedule May 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 1-25: Wow! What a terrific story! Score & Albus' story is great by itself but what makes it even better is seeing what the original generation is up to and the other characters also. You have quite a flair or imagination for fleshing out what creatures like Veela might be like. Anxious to read of what this baby Orin is like.
schedule January 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Enjoying the story, just want to read more now. ;) Keep it up. :D
person delia cerrano
schedule January 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Not big on next generation stuff but I like this one very much. Just went from begining to this chapt. I'll believe & hope Scorp is pregnant. That would show how powerful Albus is!
schedule November 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
al and score together are adorable. Al and sev bouncing off each other are hilarious.
i hope score will be alright. talk about sins of the fathers coming back to bite you in the arse.