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for A Reign of Silence

by Lomonaaeren

person SP777
schedule January 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #10...

1. The channeling of Hermione idea came from reading this line 'Harry thought about all the times that other
Aurors had accused him of being unsubtle and not understanding politics, and wished that they could be here
now, so they could apologize to him.'
, it is something she has accused of in HP stories & WISHED he
did more of.

Sooo, the fact he was actually doing it with Elder, had the idea pop in my head that Harry was channeling what Hermione had
been nagging him to do for so long.

2. You know once they've 'somewhat' gotten over their unease with each other...I find that I like seeing Potter, Malfoy, Jenkins
& Warren work together. They each have their own strengths that winds up helping each other as a group.

I hope you don't mind if I call them "The Quaternity" for right now since typing those names takes too long.

3. ...and with all that said, soo...did u creep yourself out writing this chapter? :-)
By the way, you must like scary movies.

4. Does Elder have a flaw??? And don't say it is to be increasingly annoying.
person SP777
schedule January 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #9...

Part of me really hopes they be able to save some part of McGeorge
in the end. ...and I didn't think Elder could be THAT annoying.

...and please don't tell me Harry is going to start channeling Hermione at
the least wanted possible moment.
person delia cerrano
schedule January 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Still following. Can't stand Elder or the Senior Malfoys but that's not new. Kind of a quiet chapter. Not much Draco/Harry.
person Rina
schedule January 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I've always hated Elder ever since you introduced him as Isla's new partner. I had a feeling that, because of his prejudice against Draco, he would prove a hindrance to everyone in the corps. His personality reminds me of Percy, by the book, a stickler for rules and order, everything black and whitewith no room for gray areas. Percy was my least favorite character by the way which is probably another reason why I'm not fond of Elder. Percy only slightly redeemed himself at the end of DH. Only slightly though. The only way I see this Mega ignoramus redeeming himself in my eyes would be if he tripped and fell in front of an oncoming curse meant for Draco.
schedule January 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Whoooo A new lairrrrrr hehe, Cant wait for that.

I did like Rudie before, but I kinda dont like her now, go figure lol.

Good chapter, hope something cool (or evil) happens in the Forest.
person SP777
schedule January 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
#8...

Sounds like an underhanded attempt at divide & conquer if you
ask me.
schedule December 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
:D Yep, this chapter was a little more scary than the last, poor Draco having to face that and have his entire life re-written. Good job the others were there.

Nice chapter, wonder what the forbidden forest has to do with it, but yaaaaay a trip to Hogwarts :D
person SP777
schedule December 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #7..

1. Okay I have to ask...what is 'Confringo cordem'?

2. You know, I really..REALLY do consider this series a personal
favorite. :-) What about you? What's yours?

3. Gotta admit the excitement & action is spot on. You brought the intensity
in this scene AND brought in psychological warfare...and you said you had problems
making it work. Did you think it through or get help..etc. ?

4. SO, are we finally leaving 'Little House..' behind?
person delia cerrano
schedule December 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Still here enjoying all the weird creatures. I would have thought that Dracos greatest fear would have been more to do with the blood feud and a another dementor attack or losing Harry. Same with Harry I was surprised by his fear not being to do with Draco or his blood feud.
schedule December 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am stating to like Jenkins alot more now. Good chapter and just have to say

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahah (I seriously fell almost backwards at the mental picture of Draco with a tenticle sucker on his face!)