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for Set Me Free

by makochan0217

person delia cerrano
schedule November 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What an imaginative fun story! Going on to the sequel now.
person jujukitty
schedule November 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwww! i loved this! it was so cute and funny and sweet and i loved little rose and i'd love a sequel, or at least a side-bit where maybe draco writes rose a letter thanking her for her friendship or something. this was so wonderful :D
schedule November 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoyed the the story. It was enjoyable and well written. Draco makes me laugh with Rose
person hotflower901
schedule November 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this was wonderful
person heartstar
schedule November 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh I do hope you make a sequil to this I would love to see this working out for them haryy would have a partner and Draco would be able to see his young friends again maybe and they would both be happy
schedule November 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was Super Cute! And very well written, to boot. Such diction! Such eloquence! You're characters were spot-on, very engaging and as well rounded as it can get in a oneshot. The plot flowed smoothly and firmly held the reader's interest without ever getting over-dramatic. You left us wanting more. It's something to be proud of. ^^
person alexkdp
schedule November 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
please tell me that this is not a oneshot? that would be insane, i can see SO MANY possibilities and such fun with all the smut they could have whilst being in their animagus form! OH! great work. i LOVED it. please write more? *begs*
person JanisJ
schedule November 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, that was very sweet! And so funny, that the next chapter in the story I'm currently writing, has Narcissa making an appearance and-- her Animagus form is a swan!! I KNOW that's not cannon.... but isn't it just perfect for her personality? Great minds think alike!

I thought your details were beleivable and endearing to the characters. Loved the fic.... good job! :)
person ChaosLady
schedule November 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was a wonderful, long and well written chapter.
schedule November 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
it's cute and the idea is good but it seems a little unfinished somehow. will there be more or is this the end?