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person heartstar
schedule November 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
lol very nice I first thought you were gonna have a whole prince and the pea thing but I love rthe ghost idea better!
person delia cerrano
schedule November 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure if your "finite" means this was a one chapter story or the end of that chapter. Now that they have found each other I'm not sure where the story would go...arguments over the wedding & honeymoon arrangements or where they will live?
Maybe someone will try to break them up? Probably something I haven't even thought of...like there is a mystery they have to solve. Anyway, if it does continue I will for sure be reading.
schedule November 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
an excellent little story though i didn't recongnise the princess and the pea element till i read over the blurb. if i could fave it i so would.