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November 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to more. Definately has my interest.
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November 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am eager for you to continue the story, anxious to see what lies ahead..please update soon!
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November 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good stuff, keep writing.
Did he run away or was he just taken to the hospital/infirmary?
Did he run away or was he just taken to the hospital/infirmary?
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November 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I would love for you to continue. I cannot offer constructive criticism as I didn't notice any problems (can't say that means that definitly aren't any, just nothing blaring:)
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November 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like what you have. I'm curious to know what Snape thinks of Hermione helping him. I hope you continue!
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November 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like it - please continue it but I must insist on one thing - happy ending. But overall - really good first chapter!
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November 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm eager to see where you are going with this! I love the stories where he hates her for saving his life at first. Then he realizes there is so many more enjoyable things to do once your master is gone and an eager young lass willing to help you through a trying time ;)
You have not got to any plot points as of yet, though I already like the way you write. I hope this could be a multi chaptered story in the near future!
Good Luck!
You have not got to any plot points as of yet, though I already like the way you write. I hope this could be a multi chaptered story in the near future!
Good Luck!
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November 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I would like to see you continue this. Keep up the good work!
Hugs, TCQ
Hugs, TCQ