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February 17, 2018 at 12:00 AM
Cute story, perahps you can answer a Q. for me? How do I follow stories on this site?
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December 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Who was Harry cheating on Ginny with? I'm so confused.
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March 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I feel that a story like this certainly deserves more reviews than the single one it has gotten so far.
Very well written, in my opinion. Despite the pairing being far from canon, I feel it was done in a believable way.
The characters are very close to the way they're in canon, and the few changes in behaviour and personality that are there seem to follow logical development as they simply no longer are children. I like how they still express the traits of their former Houses, without it being in the same childish way they did at Hogwarts.
Although just a side-character, I feel you've caught Molly's overbearingness and over-protectiveness very well, without exaggerating it too much. The only thing I'm not sure if it fits within the character's personality is Harry cheating on Ginny.
However, it was described and explained well and even in real life you sometimes learn that people you'd think would never cheat actually did. You've caught the way in which Ginny on the one hand knows something is amiss, yet on the other hand doesn't -want- to know pretty well.
Th sex between Ginny and Pansy certainly was done well, too, though at times the choice of words jarred me out of it a little. The most concrete example I can think of right now is the line "She repositioned herself, so her crotch lined up right on top of Ginny
Very well written, in my opinion. Despite the pairing being far from canon, I feel it was done in a believable way.
The characters are very close to the way they're in canon, and the few changes in behaviour and personality that are there seem to follow logical development as they simply no longer are children. I like how they still express the traits of their former Houses, without it being in the same childish way they did at Hogwarts.
Although just a side-character, I feel you've caught Molly's overbearingness and over-protectiveness very well, without exaggerating it too much. The only thing I'm not sure if it fits within the character's personality is Harry cheating on Ginny.
However, it was described and explained well and even in real life you sometimes learn that people you'd think would never cheat actually did. You've caught the way in which Ginny on the one hand knows something is amiss, yet on the other hand doesn't -want- to know pretty well.
Th sex between Ginny and Pansy certainly was done well, too, though at times the choice of words jarred me out of it a little. The most concrete example I can think of right now is the line "She repositioned herself, so her crotch lined up right on top of Ginny
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October 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Okay... I just wanna say I love your story very, very, very much and I'm not opposed to read a sequel ;-P
Thanks for the ride ;-D
Thanks for the ride ;-D