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by Dramionia

person Crittenz
schedule January 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
UPDATES please and thank you. I love this story and can't wait for more.
person Crittenz
schedule January 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
@Chester - The phrophesy says that the child would not pass on the name to future generations. So what if the child is a girl? Everyone knows a girl doesn't pass on her family name. When she marries she'll take on the surname of her husband. It's an idea anyways. I can't wait for another update and to read more of this story. I like that it stays true to their charachters. Out of charachter is alright sometimes but occasionally I like to read about them coming together while they are most like themselves. Keep up the good work Dramionia.

~ Crittenz
schedule January 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Draco is the ultimate Slytherin!!!
schedule December 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
arrggg!!! Harry needs to make his own decision and go talk to Hermione without Ron. Of course Ron would be angry and not be able to talk right now but Harry should know better.
person chester25
schedule December 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter. Part of me wants to tell Hermione to go home and travel to a regular clinic and get an abortion rather than a portion. I realize that that would ruin the whole story. It will be interesting to see if Draco changes his mind and what Hermione's reaction will be when she finds out about the prophecy. And that was an interesting line you put in there - that the child will not affect the Malfoys. You make it sound that this is a lose lose situation for her. I hope not. I have to admit that I do enjoy my happy endings. And with regards to Harry and Ron - I never said that they were evil - just jedgemental and not good friends. I have strong feelings about people lying to me, especially for their own gain - so I guesss that's why this struck a bad cord.
person Sarah
schedule December 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So glad you updated. Thought it was gonna be one of those stories that I start reading but never gets updated. Its annoying when that happens. lol. Really like this story. I like how Draco and Hermione don't instantly fall in love and they seem in character like in the books. Also love the long chapters. I'm looking forward to your next chapter. Please update soon.
person Chester25
schedule December 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
How dare Harry cut her off after all she did for him! Make sure s
He grovels well! Looking forward to reading the rest!
schedule December 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow... I like how this takes the action that happened in the story and adds this story right along with it. Poor Hermione... and poor Draco actually. He's still at the point where he hasn't quite figured out how overboard his pure-blood views are.I'm dying to know what his mom is going to say.
person dh_reader
schedule December 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is the first time I read a story about a Draco so close to the perception we have of him in the books. Though he is so damn hateful, I really like your characterization of him.
Keep up with the good work!
person kmb3
schedule November 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like where this is going. Great story so far. Update soon I want to read more :)