schedule
December 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far, just one continuity issue. You had a character refer to Harry as the-boy-who-lived. But from the sounds of it he shouldn't be referred to that. They still don't know what happened that night and that the dark lord tried to kill him. Otherwise I think your plot is going well =)
schedule
November 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just sent you a review asking you to update this and lo and behold it's updated! THANK YOU! I also recently reread this tonight. I'm so glad to hear that Cora is so accepted by the pack. I hope they find Harry soon!
schedule
November 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
damn, but you write a fine story. somehow i don't remember this one though. maybe i missed it. >>
anyway, they need to find har asap. it sounds like he;s not being well treated at all. good grief. if sev feels bad imagine how poor siri feels with dementors on top of that.
anyway, they need to find har asap. it sounds like he;s not being well treated at all. good grief. if sev feels bad imagine how poor siri feels with dementors on top of that.
schedule
October 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying the story so far and can't wait for another update.
schedule
October 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Didn't like it at 1st but thiught I'd try it because I've liked your other stories. But it is very interesting now. Still not sure of the idea of twins but still going to read and I'll probably get used to that also.
schedule
October 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is great but I wish you would update more often! ^_^
schedule
October 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It did, can't wait for more.
schedule
October 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Acceptable! update soon
schedule
October 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is really good!
schedule
October 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story, curious yo see where it goes