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March 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Exceeds expectations!
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March 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Somehow I missed some chapters but am caught up now. Wish AFF had email notification. This is getting better & better. Poor Harry!! Love that Remus & Severus have finally gotten together & that they fit together so well as well as Remus knowing some of Sev's bad childhood. It should help Remus understand why Sev thinks & does as he does.
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March 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ch 5- couple little issues i found: 1)Luc tells sev "The Dark Lord is at Lestrange Castle still"...ummmm?! so they know where he's at and haven't bothered to tell anyone else yet? he's supposed to be dead, right? 2)you said the young werewolves shifted to wolves and let cora play with them, maybe i just misunderstood, but i thought they couldn't shift at will and that they couldn't retain their human minds when they did?
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March 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
interesting story so far, saw you re-used the description of merrivale from another of your fics lol. i'm curious to see how this thing with harry having a twin plays out, but so far it's going well. when lolly was giving sev instructions on holding cora, while what she said was right, it wasn't necessarily accurate for a baby cora and harry's age - usually after a few months they lose the whole "bobble-head" thing and can support their own heads. keep up the good work, i'm looking foward to seeing where you go with this
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February 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Your story is so amazing, it's totally captivating. Please update soon :D
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January 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was entiresly too short for a such a long hiatus.
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January 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I realize it actually hasn't been that long since your last update but it feels longer because my laptop was on the fritz and I was using my mother's laptop. It still feels too short, though.
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January 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
At least Severus was able to do something constructive to find Harry. So I don't mind the dark turn. Excellent update.
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December 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ty for writing that with me in mind but, but, but... *whimpers over har's misery.
i hope they find him before permanent damage is done to the poor kid. it's a pity they can't use cora in some way to help track him down. is he really in an orphanage or do the dursleys have him stashed in the cupboard?
yes, i'm a bit confused about where the kid could possibly be. i may have to go and re read things to try and get a better pic.
i hope they find him before permanent damage is done to the poor kid. it's a pity they can't use cora in some way to help track him down. is he really in an orphanage or do the dursleys have him stashed in the cupboard?
yes, i'm a bit confused about where the kid could possibly be. i may have to go and re read things to try and get a better pic.
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December 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like we are starting to get somewhere! Excellent update!