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It's really good, hope you update as much as possible!

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OMG this story is so great that I forgetting all my english
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interesting start to things, i like the idea that dudley had been playing a part all this time. few little issues: 1) a sports bike wouldn't have a side car more than likely (i've -never- seen one, i don't think they're designed for them), 2) you keep switching between first (i am) to third (he is) person view and occasionally from past to present tense through the story at apparently random intervals which throws off the flow of the story. over all, a good start and i look forward to seeing where you go with this