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Ok first I think you are doing a really great job with this story so kudos! I love how the characters interact with each other, it's believable and really excellent.

(Warning of rant) Unfortunately You just confirmed an annoyance for me in this newest chapter. Back in Chapter three you called it All Hallows Eve which is a CHRISTIAN tradition. It was the feast for the day before All Hallows or All saints day. Your talk of druids therefore contradicts whether or not the founders would have any idea what Harry is talking about as a date. That and as I am studying Druid lore and traditions I find the absolute need to beg you to change your incorrect information. Druids did not celebrate All Hallows Eve, they celebrated Samhain, as their end of year before the rest period (new year begins in February). Also you have dated the founders time to being in 990. All Hallows eve was not even a term until the mid 1500's. Please, this wouldn't be so much of an issue except that you are presenting misinformation as facts at the bottom of your chapters. Please correct it, complete further research, double check, just please. Especially if you try to include any more "druid" traditions. (end rant/begging session)

Otherwise you are doing a good job. Can't wait to read next chapter.
~Pen

One of the most interesting plots I have read in a long time. I am thoroughly enjoying this! Please continue one with it!

Thank you

Interesting story, I'm really liking it. The changes in the future are a nice touch. I like the relationship building between Harry and Salazar.
Though you have to change the disclaimer before the archive manager sends you a notification. The disclaimer must say that the characters and Harry Potter in general are not of your own creation and that you

i'm enjoying this story as it hits many of my likes: founders, time travel, harry finding love, dumbles getting his comeuppance, etc. Will harry be healed of his past injuries? after the scan, wouldn't the founders (anyone really) insist on some medical attention?

I'm really enjoying this so far. I don't always read Harry and Founders stories, but this one sounded interesting so I thought I would try it out and I like it a lot. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take it and your explanations for some of what is going on. And as for MPreg being part of the story, I personally always like a good mpreg story especially with a pregnant Harry, he's so cute pregnant. Either way I look forward to further updates.

This is a wonderful story. I agree with you a pregnant Harry is adorable. I hope that Harry can stop both Voldemort and Dumbledore. Maybe with the help of Salazar and the other founders.

I'm not one for time travel stories because its been over done, however putting the twist with the founders peaks my interest and I'm glad I started to read this as I love it. Love the fact that you have put the effort into making certain parts reflect the time frame. Also for this chapter I laughed because Princess Bride is one of my favourite movies so I was tickled pink when I read that subtle reference. Also please do mpreg, I absolutely love when Harry is pregnant, he's cute and funny

I love this story already! Hell, I registered just so I could review your story, even though I have been reading on this site for forever. Great plot line, very original circumstances for time travel. Please keep going, and update soon if you can!

A very interesting start. There are quite a few stories out there about harry going back into the past to various times but I usually don't like them that much. But this is a new take on it and well written.

I really like Salazar's possessiveness and I hope to see some more explanations on that as well as on why harry con only speak parseltounge.

I hope to read more soon!