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for Mine to Take

by Aridethdar

person Phoenix
schedule December 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story.and it's great! I love the plot.
Please update soon!
person Azera
schedule November 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is a truly fascinating take for a Voldemort/Harry. Never read anything like it! And now can't wait to see more of it! I was so sad to see that there wasn't another chapter to be read yet. Love how Harry is reacting to everything. Can't wait to read more! Thanks for posting this so others can read it too!
person Cindie Crawford
schedule October 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey, it's me again! I just read this and now I'm reviewing (obviously) because this is really cool. Maybe I should wait until you finish this to actually read it? Then I wouldn't have to wait for you to update? Cause I really want to read the rest of this.
person YaoiGirl
schedule October 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!

And I sort of feel sorry for Voldemort... O_O Never thought I'd say that.

Poor Harry, I can defenitely understand that he fainted. Though he might have the biggest revelations ahead of him yet, reaslising Voldemort's lover in this dimension really is him... Oh, I can just see it happening. Voldemort telling him who he is and Harry sort of slowly realising exactley what it means to be the lover of Voldemort... what they do/have done to each other... and that maybe Voldemort want the new him to take the place of the old him... which should be more than enough of an excuse to freak out! :P
schedule October 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
why the hells would the order of the flaming turkey murderate the one and only thing keeping voldi from going off his DL rocker. That's gotta be the height of idiocy.
so, does this mean har's dimension is sold up the creek?
i don't blame har for fainting... what a total mind f**k.
schedule October 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hmm interested in seeing where this goes. The part where harry got smacked for calling hermione old had me cracking up. Never really been a fan of Bellatrix due to the whole Longbottom affair so I am curious on what kind of person she is in this reality.
schedule October 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hey Tom can i have what your smoking , made me lmao ^_^ looking forward to more
schedule October 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so far! Interesting time travel twist. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter :)
schedule October 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is hilarious! I love you timing on the dialogue. I loved the part where Harry had to introduce himself lol.

But one thing... if the servants knew that Harry was dead... wouldn't Hermione and the inner circle know it too? Sirius sounds like something happened to their own Harry instead of being shocked that another one has shown up.
person Grinedel
schedule October 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That sounds promising. Let there be bum action!