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for Mine to Take

by Aridethdar

person WillZel
schedule April 29, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Pity the next chapter was never posted I was really enjoying that. 

schedule March 21, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Wicked story line

person Shiro
schedule January 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This is so trucking cool. Plz keep going !
schedule November 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
this is good i like it plz updates soon
person Genuka
schedule July 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You're evil. More please!
person Ner Ner
schedule April 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
this is really good.

post more soon, please.
person Frances
schedule April 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love it! Looking forward to an update!
schedule March 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm really loving your story. Me having fun with each sentence ... Please, please continue ...
Kisses.
Josi.
schedule February 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hahahah!!! I really want to see the next chapter...
schedule February 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is really precious. I can't stop reading this! Absolutely! Hopefully your muse returns this or you get a chance to update.
It was heartbreaking to imagine older Harry in that coffin and how his life was simply gone.
Of course younger Harry offers loads of fun and possibilities but will he really be like this Caelum? will he grow up different?
Is he perhaps master of the hallows already so he won't at least die?
And was it ron or who was the old friend that lured Caelum into a trap?