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I really enjoy this story. I literally lose myself in your characters. I am starting to question if these two will get their happily ever after. How many more chapters are in this story?

I am loving this story so much! I am so caught up in the relationship or, uh, non-relationship between Hermione and Severus. It's such an extreme situation, but you have made it very easy to believe. Looking forward to your next update!

I have so enjoyed this fic! I can't wait for more! Keep up the excellent writing! I eagerly await your next chapter!

So love this story! I must not have been getting email updates....or not checking my email to learn that you've added multiple chapters since I last read. I had to reread to catch up.

Soo awesome

Awesome chapter like always! I love it!
I think they're going in the right direction... baby steps and all...
But I can't help it, I think Severus told her that he fell for her, not with words but with his actions... Too bad Hermione doesn't seems to get that....

Can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon, please ;-)
Thank you!

I think that this is my favourite chapter yet!! Intense,descriptive and delicious indeed. That picnic hamper (sans ants please) is brilliant... Where can I order one?

I love how their scars mirror the other, it's somewhat poetic and I definitely agree with how you approach their confusing emotional states... After the war they are both damaged souls... Hopefully they can heal together as they cannot heal each other.

Eagerly awaiting the next installment!!

Man, those two sure no how to make things complicated! They talk in riddles and half truths and things rarely get communicated well between them it seems. Too bad the Lusty Wine wasn't actually Veritaserum. I'd be interested to know what they'd actually say - Severus in particular as he plays everything so close to the vest. Great chapter though. Oh man, that ants condom though - no way in hell! Please update again soon!

I am very happy to see un update so soon again! And the story is getting so interesting! There are several story lines going on, each one with potential - Nagel, the Convention, new crazy products..., Severus and Hermione themselves... and I still think that there should be products for a trio or more people and George(you) should develope more crazy products for more people, he should not fall behind the other businessmen... I hope there will be a lot of other products presented in this Convention which will inspire George to create new things too. And if you put some other model(male or female??) in the shop to test products for three-four people... then Hermione will totally go crazy with jealousy.. (evil smile) or maybe even Severus too but that is unlikely as he did not show any signs of jealousy after Tunis... Soooo a lot of things are happening and going to happen... I am looking forward to them..

Wonderful chapter! I have not heard that phrase before. I have heard the phrase; The calm before the storm. Hermione made some progress this chapter, but I wonder if the storm is strong enough to undo that progress? As alway I have enjoyed this story, to me plot is just as important as the workshop scenes and sexy scenes. With out some form of plot and story development, a story can become dull. Your story never has a dull moment. All I ask for is a happy ending. Keep writing and thank you for all the effort you put in this story.