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I wish you would update a new chapter i absolutely love this story. Ive been waiting hardcore and i think that yoi wrote this story beautifully :-)

This was a sad one... Found to Nigel?! Poor little girl.

Their relationship is slowly budding I to something a little more substantial and I'm loving it~! I'm pretty sure there is more drama over the horizon but in the mean time I'll smile and feel all fuzzy inside from their cute banter. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Where'd you go? I miss you so! It's been almost 2 months, since you've updated! Midterms? It's all good if it's school, just don't leave for another year please!!!!

I've been trying to wait patiently for the next installment of your fantastic story, but I couldn't stand it anymore...please, don't leave us hanging too long! I am so curious to see what happens next with their relationship!

I'm in love with your story. Please update. I read the whole thing in under a week. That was after your last update. I check everyday to see if you have wrote. You must continue. You've left us on an edge. Thank you for letting us into your head. It's lovely.

The product testing in this chapter was soo hot! I can't believe they had to be hosed down like dogs in heat and /twice/ at that! 😂 also I'm fairly sure you looked straight into my nightmares when you came up with that ant-condom, that skeeved me out worse than the milk duds D:

Really glad to see that they managed to talk a few things out, but man Hermione is starting to seriously fall apart! I'm kind of disappointed she didn't stick with her plan to only be intimate with him at the shop, but considering her damaged state of mind and raging hormones it's not all that surprising she didn't. I'm quite nervous as to what this storm/tempest of yours is going to bring, but i'm excited for it nonetheless!

Just loving this story, very steamy. Will you finish it?

OMG! I liked this story at the beginning, but it's getting too insane for my taste. How can she stay in his house after all the shit he says to her again and again? I'm expecting the time when she is going to get up and leave!!! Like the Hermione of the book would do. Right now he tells her that in normal circumstances he would NEVER sleep with her, she almost cries, and what she does next? Throws herself at him wanting sex??? Dear Lord. The sex scenes are hot, but this Hermione with no self-respect and this emotional abusive Snape, it's just not right....

So Severus isn't as unaffected as he makes himself out to be. Whoo hoo!! Great chapter!