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This story is great so far! I would love to read more. You're a fantastic writer!

Loving your story. Sexy and fun! Thanks for sharing and I look forward to more!!!

I love it so far, please continue

She's a brave, brave girl! I don't know how desperate you have to be to make that request. And, how unaffected can a man be?! Is he really that cruel, or is he trying to stay uninvolved? I sure hope he shows some feeling soon, otherwise, she might crack. lol Thanks, HG4eva

*snorts* Leave it to Sev to hate bubble gum. Honestly, if done right it is a wonderful flavor filled with nostalgia...and great for making amoxacylin (sp?)taste acceptable to kids...either way! Great chapter. That was just cruel leaving Hermione like that lol. I don't know why, but that tongue toy scares me. At the very least though it should turn off after orgasm, after all, if it becomes painful after its not much fun. Interesting idea though! I can't wait to see how the "pebbles" turn out and what other crazy ideas you have. I have to wonder though, if they have an oral toy for women, is there going to be a male version? Like guys here have fleshlights. Only the wizarding one is bj's?

oh my they would have to put a limited use on the one product or he will maKE MONEYU AND THEN NONE LOL INTERESTING!

Amazing! Exciting to see more of your writings, I always seem to particularly enjoy them.

This is a great story that gives you a lot of room to work with, wonderful story idea! Can't wait to see what creative ideas you come up with next. :)

Great chapter...please update soon

Loving this so far! You really captured the awkwardness in the first chapter. Can't believe he left her hanging without orgasming though! I'd commit murder if someone did that to me! Lol!

Oh this is so wickedly good..