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for Weasley's Wizard Wheezes

by CryingCinderella

person Lauren_W
schedule June 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for such a quick update! I love the spray on panties. Damn you are creative! Looking forward to the next chapter!!
person vero 13340
schedule June 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
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schedule June 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was fun and funny. I loved her little streak of defiance and I hope she gets more backbone going. His caustic, biting wit is somewhat amusing, but I LOVED his losing control, even if only a bit. I wonder why he feels the need to be so completely clinical about it all. Defense mechanism, perhaps? And, despite her lack of experience, she needs to stop feeling so overwhelmed by it all, so that she can gain some equal footing. lol The idea of the panties was interesting and I look forward to what else was in the box. :-) A night at Spinner's End, huh? Yeah! Thank you, HG4eva
person Bkd
schedule June 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure why I like reading this story so much.

It's well written, certainly and your characterisation of Snape is incredibly spot on. But I honestly can't say why I check daily to see if there's an update lol. The story deals with sex almost constantly, but in general it's not sex for pleasure, you know? So I don't think of it as smut. And then the romantic side of things (if there is going to be one) hasn't come into full swing yet so what is it! Haha. Don't get me wrong, I enjoy the little experiments and how you've thrown Hermione and Snape into this completely biz are situation. I love reading how they're dealing with it and each other.

Your ideas for your Wheezes are so brilliant too - god wouldn't it be brilliant if they were actually real?!

I must say, I feel so soeey for Hermione. You haven't bought it up too often but she's jobless and homeless - which is just so bloody sad. She fills her days flitting around visiting friends because she's got nowhere to go and nothing to do, apart from hitting the library I suppose. I don't know how she's coping with it.

Loved the chapter, garden of Eden panties are the best product yet! Can't wait to see Snape finally lose control of himself.

Keep up the good work :)-
person Missycam
schedule June 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhh finally!!!! Can't wait to see the next chapter! ;-)
schedule June 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yesssss! Let's hope things "progress" appropriately when they are FINALLY alone!
LOL
person Lunajen
schedule June 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oooh hoohoo! Inviting her back to his place that old Slytherin...
person Nami
schedule June 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ahahaha I'm dying XDD Thank goodness she thought of the cream ^_^;
person DiamondFloodedDemons
schedule June 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely in love with this story. It's oddly sexy and also very comical. I like how Severus is just being himself even during moments that heighten pleasure. It's so like him remain stoic also while having a rager. Lmao. Can't wait for the next chapter :D
schedule June 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Geeze, you'd think getting laid would loosen Snape up. Maybe he needs to be tied up and fucked right.