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I realy am enjoying this A LOT more than I expected. The way that you have made the facade of snaps so clinical is an approach that has caught my interest. Please keep writing this story! I'm loving it!

WOW! Just... wow!
You did very well, it was cute, intimate, perfect
Thank you

*Picks up a heavy cast iron skillet* Okay Severus. Could you ATTEMPT to be nice for once. She's homeless for Merlin's sake.

Great story and plot! Please continue with this story (I'm so glad that you picked it up again)!

The sex is really creative. Your creativity is sort of your trademark as far as I'm concerned. Your stories really utilize the possibilities of the wizarding world more than any other writer I have seen, so kudos for that. But the thing I enjoy more than the sex is Hermione's struggle. I can see her getting blackballed, I can see her trying to exist without letting anyone know but in reality it seems like EVERYONE knows. Molly's invitations for her to visit and stay the night illustrate that so nicely. Severus isn't sweet, fluffy, or approachable, but they both are put into such desperate straits that they are willing to sell their bodies to survive. George's dilemma is a little heartbreaking as well. He needs the clever, inventive partner and also someone to brew and create them because his loss of Fred. This is so vivid in the way you have him bring up his lost half throughout the testing. He seems clever enough to hint at luring these two brilliant and under-appreciated people to take over the part, and he could do SO MUCH worse. It seems like this situation which looks bad on the surface can bring all of these people together who really need each other. I'm starting to root for all of them. I'm not sure of Severus' feelings on the situation, but it seems to me that the prospect of 10 percent and future work combined with the possibility of him not being so lonely because he has Hermione (who appreciates and seems to tolerate him) would be a jackpot for him. Am looking forward to finding out how this turns out.

Oh Fuck! My favorite chapter so far!
Keep writing these smutty treats ^^

Okay, I gotta say... I'm not really a fan of anal, or even the idea of anal, and I've personally never done it, myself, but... This was hot! lol. I'm not sure if it's just because it's Snape, and because I have a serious fem-boner for him or what, but I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. In this particular story, it really wasn't a shocker for some reason to see that he's bisexual. Even the idea of that is pretty damn hot too. Keep it up :D I love this story! Can't wait to see where it goes!

so severus is bisexual?? although he lack of response to her sexually makes me think his sadly gay!!! Hermione

Her trust in him is touching. It doesn't seem to visibly melt any of those walls he puts up, but maybe off the page he feels it. He does seem to be relenting in letting her know a bit more about his sexuality, and the circumstances would really necessitate that she have some sort of idea about what he does and doesn't like. His grumpy admission of her into his house was kind of funny (if you aren't Hermione). He knows that she will be needing to stay with him, he just can't bring himself to NOT give her a hard time about it. He knows she's pretty good at cleaning charms, though, so that's a bonus. :D LOL, I can't believe that he was complaining about her needing to practice blow jobs on him!!! Oh, poor baby! It must be so terrible to have a young, beautiful, smart woman who admits to being attracted to you begging you to let her give you a hummer! The humanity! Thank goodness for obliviate- you wouldn't want to have to remember such a terrible thing! ;D I noticed he'd been thinking about it, though.

So, wait though, she has shrunken her sheets and pillows and clothing, has she shrunken her furniture from the old apartment? Is it in her bag or is it in the attic of Grimmauld place or something? Her bed has to be more comfortable than Severus' lumpy but charmed single one. I wonder if he will try to trade her or have her pay him with it for 'rent' once he sees it in the extended room they will make. If I were him I would totally sneak down and take naps in it.

I really adore this story.. One of the very few that keeps getting more and more intriguing.. I like the fact we know nothing about Snape's thoughts or the reasons behind his behaviour(despite the fact that he is an adorable bastard most of the time) yet. And although it makes me sad that Hermione has lost her home because i realize these things can happen even with the most brilliant ones, it's inspiring that she keeps fighting! On the "naughty" part now why (basically WHY????) a potion for anal preparation??? It can be so fun with the "muggle" way...