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for Weasley's Wizard Wheezes

by CryingCinderella

schedule September 3, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Pleeeresde come back, I’m begging you

person M-K
schedule July 19, 2018 at 12:00 AM

This story is truly amazing to read! I wish I could write like this. Please update soon I'm craving it.

person Peahen
schedule June 18, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Hmmm....a flaming penis?!?!   Well I hope that doesn’t take 3 years to resolve!  I love the story and your writing, though Hermione is a bit of a twat...why does Severus put up with her bitchiness?  Email kimpeahen@gmail.com when a new installlment is available please! 

schedule April 26, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I have really enjoyed this fantastic story. This is the second HP story that I have read so far. I enjoyed this pair Hermione and Snapes.  I love the way their relationship is evolving. I could not decided if Severus is starting to fall in love with her.  I felt sad that she did not tell him about Nigel visit and message. I hope if Severus discovers about it,he will not be too angry with her. 

I love what they are  doing in the shop.  You have such an imagination regarding magical sex toys.  I really hope to read you soon. Thanks for this very interesting and not so ordinary  story.  While waiting, I will start another one of your stories. Thanks

schedule April 26, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I have really enjoyed this fantastic story. This is the second HP story that I have read so far. I enjoyed this pair Hermione and Snapes.  I love the way their relationship is evolving. I could not decided if Severus is starting to fall in love with her.  I felt sad that she did not tell him about Nigel visit and message. I hope if Severus discovers about it,he will not be too angry with her. 

I love what they are  doing in the shop.  You have such an imagination regarding magical sex toys.  I really hope to read you soon. Thanks for this very interesting and not so ordinary  story.  While waiting, I will start another one of your stories. Thanks

person MrsTrax
schedule April 18, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Ah! So glad to see this updated! I can’t wait to see how not telling Severus about Nigel’s visit comes back to bite Hermione. I love that you continue to write them both as such flawed and broken people - Severus denying all things emotional and Hermione being so consumed by her insecurity. 

person allier79
schedule April 17, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I’m so glad you’re back! I have been missing your updates, I have reread this story so many times in the past 3 years! I’m so excited to see where you take this story! I’m already eagerly anticipating your next chapter! yay!!! CryingCinderella is back!!!! *happy dance*

person Arconada
schedule April 13, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Thank you for going on with this story. I have some pity for this Nigel boy, but he is such a prat. And I fear that he always complicate deweloping a relationship between Hermine and Severus when he shows himself.

I realy love your Ideas for this crazy stuff they test, always a little surprise garated. What a Cliffhanger...

Hope muse will be kind to you so that i can read more of this soon.

Thank you for writing

Arconada

schedule April 10, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Ohhh I can't wait for that Nancy boy to jump off a bridge. Blech get all hot and bothered and then have to picture 2 guys it's like an ice bath. I sort of wish Hermione did a little more with potions. I like your Hermione but she seems a little .... empty sometimes. We don't ever get to see a hint of her genious and I think working with severus in his potions lab would bring them that much closer and edge the gay twit out because he will realize Hermione is much more suitable and beautiful and sexy.  Also, I would love to see either Hermione in danger.... a rogue deatheater? To make Severus realize how much he needs her or have Hermione actually resist Severus and he being on the receiving end finally feels what jealousy is like. I don't usually like pregnancy fics but it would be nice inclusion too

person Troggs
schedule April 5, 2018 at 12:00 AM

“Severus!” she cried once more. “Your penis is on fire!” WOW!!! I nearly dropped my laptop reading that.

Is this the same as Hermione's bluebell fire that didn't hart or real flames. Hermione ate half the chocolate to, so is she going th have a same responce as Snape or the oppoisite( fire and ice).

Please can you clear up the question of underage sex, I can't think that Severus would be involved in this after working in a school for so long.

Still love the story and can't wait to find out what happend next, please make it soon