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"As anatomically correct as a Ken doll..."

Did he... Did he just tell her to go have a one night stand?  Wow. And if it sucks, well, they know it's HIM. But if she really enjoys it... Either she picked someone mediocre, or she's a nympho.. (which I doubt, lol!)

Still loving this story!

Hope you update soon. The really powerful and appealing aspects  of this story are really starting to blossom and are very compelling. Hope the story isn't as lost as poor Severus. Thank you for sharing.

Love the story. But I'd leave his butt.

II so love this story. I thought you had stoped writing it. What a surprise to see a new chapter.

i did not expect the way the chapter ended and I love it even more because of that.  I look forward to the next. I like the way she called his place "  home".

Thanks for this story. 

This chapter was..... shit, it was tru-ly amazing, really. I’ve waited so long, hopelessly, that you would publish a new chapter, that you cannot imagine how happy I was when I received an alert. I really, really hope that you will not leave after that, as the last time, but that we will have a new chapter soon because I really can’t wait and I’m so so frustrated.

Wow. What a cliff hanger. Great writing as per usual.

Ok, well, where to start?
A fire department wasn't needed, I like their method of "putting out the fire" more at any rate ;)

The "dirty" chocolate - now that's the one I really like. It truly lowers the inhibition, enough to loosen Snape's tongue :D Or did I just imagined it? I don't think so, Snape isn't the one to just burb 

“My filthy little slut…”  without the reason! Sure, I get it, domination can be a potent thing, but - they are not in that situation at the moment. 

Not to mention that these truffles have a more of an emotional toll on Sev than just a physical one. Especially coupled with this "to that of Felix Felicious or Veritaserum with minor alterations".  And if you add this "as you’ve already condemned me to developing a hint of a fondness for you" - from Snape this is as good as love statement :D

And I like how his own insecurities are shining through, not quite visible but there, he left her to decide! That is huge for him. He did that from time to time but more as a challenge, this feels more detached, almost apathetic, like he is scared what might surface next. Like, he doesn't want that responsibility. 

it is funny you know; they have a sort of d/s relationship, but she keeps on fighting him, she does not acknowledge her own needs. If she admits to herself she sees herself as weak and tries to rationalise. Her ignorance is understandable, many do see the position of submissive or bottom as a position of weakness, untrue but hmmmmmmmm...

Ok, Blueberry one was just hawt!!!

The purple one - a perfect description of the date-rape drug and I love Snape's reaction to it. His perception of how it might be misused. 

And then all hell broke loose! Damn!  I like your description of Snape's inner turmoil; it is so visceral. And I had the desire to strangle Hermione!!! How dare she, I do not condone her behaviour (or his when he did it). Worse of all - what did she think that he reacted that way because he's empathetic? It is obvious that he is struggling with something that bothers him, and yet... She violated him! She forced her way in his mind and she has a gal to condemn him for what she saw? 

He is correct; she IS a child, selfish, stubborn child that lash out. She demands something of him that take loads of time and trust, but she never set even a basis for that trust. And when she does not get what she wants, she lashes out. At this point it feels like she doesn't see him, she sees what she wants him to be and not who he is. She directs that anger to him because he isn't a knight in shining armour she wants him to be - dark for all but to her. She really needs to grow up. 

And one moment, one moment when he really needed (if not wanted) her support, her touch - she abandoned him. Like selfish brat! And those words in the end... I am really angry at her.

funny thing about Snape, he was never about the words and all about the deeds. Hermione, on the other hand, is a type of Machiavellian do-gooder. She has a strong moral compass but the bottom line is that end justifies the means for her, but only if she is the one doing whatever she's done.

Well, I can't wait for the next chapter! Until then,
Love and kisses and hugs <3 :*  

Your fanfiction is truly amazing. The characters are so well-portrayed and the plot is so entertaining. I’m waiting for a new chapter since 8 months and I begin to be hopeless. Did you stop writing because of a lack of motivation ? God I really hope it’s not the case. I just want you to know that a lot of people are still waiting and I beg you to write another chapter, it’s so frustrating ! 

SO GOOD I CANNOT WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER, POR FAVOR!!!!