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for In the Arms of her Dragon

by Wolf.Blossom

person chunibaby
schedule August 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM

HOW COULD YOU????!!!!

 

How could you be so mean and end that chapter like that? I'll be honest and say that I skipped majority of what Maxy-boy had said but I'll re-read it since you left me hanging this chapter. I think it would've been better if you made Draco recognize Blaise's relation to the Kapral since Hermione did tackle it with him before, if I recall correctly. It would've been more logical.

 

I hope you'll update soon. I can't wait to read what will happen next and your bad guy in the story is intriguing.

 

Best of luck from your fan,

chunibaby xx

person DH4ever
schedule August 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I loved this chapter and I'm looking forward to the next one. Please update soon!!!

I'm really excited with the direction this is going and all the details about the dragon empire. Can't wait to know more!!

person DH4ever
schedule August 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I started reading the story only today but I couldn't stop till I read the 24th chapter. I absolutely love it so far. I was laughing out loud at their journal conversations. U have managed to capture the romance so beautifully. I hope you continue the story till the end. I'll be looking forward to your additions everyday

person Sherrie
schedule August 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Just finished this, and I think it is very well written. I like the Hermione/ Draco plot line and am excited to see where the dragon idea goes. This reads very easy, like YA genre, which is very much in keeping with the HP original, but with more focus on the romantic aspects of the Hermione/Draco relationship. 

person Moxie Mayhem
schedule August 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Yay you updated! 

I am kinda disappointed,

The chapters don't seem 

As long as earlier on.

But still happy and on edge

With how u left it, in a good way

Of course 😅

schedule August 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I'm so glad you didn't abandon this story. I have really enjoyed it and can't wait for more. 

person Katyms
schedule August 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I love it!

person Anonymous
schedule August 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Love! Can't wait for more!!

person DireIntention
schedule August 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Love, love, love this story so far! Sometimes the characterization of some of the background characters seems a bit off but never enough to really pull me out of the story. Also minor editing errors (Vance's name changed to Vincent?) but again, not enough to really hinder the story. I love Draco in this and feel like his character is perfectly written. Please, please, please continue! I stayed up until 4AM to get caught up on this. :) ❤️

person Anonymous
schedule July 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I love your story! I read all 21 chapters today, I literally couldn't stop reading it! Thank you so much for sharing it!