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October 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying your story so far. It's really well written,and thought out. Thanks for sharing it. If you update send me email would love to keep up with it. tfisher18@msn.com Thanks
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October 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS SO GOOD PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!
Dying from heart-throbbing overload
Dying from heart-throbbing overload
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October 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
really like your story! can't wait to see what happens next
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October 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to finally see another chapter! And a good one at that! I liked the teasing/flirting going on between them when they discussed the "friendship hierarchy". Also, I was concerned one of the first year students might see them flying. Oh and I like the idea of the journals.
Post more soon please!
Cheers,
SW
Post more soon please!
Cheers,
SW
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October 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
p.s. I forgot to mention that I thought the picnic was an overall great scene. The fact that you included a picnic blanket makes it even more stellar to me as I love those and think they're an awesome date prop. Further, I really liked the parts where they were checking the other out, unbeknownst to the other person. (does that make sense? haha) Oh and kissing the forehead, the cheek and behind the ear? EXCELLENT. :)
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October 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is a fantastic story! I thought it was going to be just another cliche Draco/Hermione story, but it isn't! You have created the characters amazingly, and I can honestly say I was hooked within the first five sentences. WELL DONE! Oh, and do you think you could quickly update the story? Because I am anxiously waiting to rad more!
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October 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is really a very good story! I enjoyed it soooooooo much! The exchange of letters between the two is so original it got me so hooked up. Finally i was thrilled with their meeting once again. These two are in love and im so excited to see the next chapter!
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October 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just found this and I am loving it. I was totally hooked on the first chapter. I can't wait to see where this is going. Please, may I have another?
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October 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is really good I can't wait till the next chapter!
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October 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i spent years alone and bullied and i learned quickly that bruises heal but the insults after a while you hear them in your head and they don't stop i agree that what they did to her was wrong i kept myself from that point by reading unrelentingly and seeing a counselor and i have to agree we're not alone and cruel children lashing out to make themselves feel better do more harm then they ever did good