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June 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Shame on those boys for not defending Hermione, I don't care if both people are my friends, saying something like that is unacceptable and I would have put them in their place, no if ands or buts. It seems that the Slytherins are much more accepting of who their housemates are with then the gryffindors.
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June 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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June 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loving this story. Can't wait to read more. I love a romantic Draco.
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June 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'd completely forgotten you were aiming for 100 chapters!! *gawks at screen* You are going to kill us!!
In other news, that was a good chapter and the magic carpet ride was endearing! I know have "A Whole New World" in my head and will likely have dreams of it. Thanks for that. :P Further, I like the idea of a choclate bouquet. Where may I order mine?
Is it in the books that Theo and Tracey date? Is Tracey even a "real" character? I've seen her name in other fic and she's always dating Theo. Interesting. (I read the books ages ago; sorry I can't recall that detail.)
I enjoyed the conversation about Draco's name and whether he will "live up to it." I think you can play around with that one for a while and it'll still be good.
I think her dormmates will suspect she has a secret beau soon. Or atleast a crush. I was slightly surprised that Draco admitted he was keeping a secret. That might not bode well for a secret romance.
Thanks for posting and good luck with the laptop/bed ordeal. From experience I can say---yeah, that's no fun at all. Meh. May I suggest a book under the laptop and then the book upon a pillow and many pillows behind your back? It helps, somewhat. For a while.
Good night all!
EEvans
In other news, that was a good chapter and the magic carpet ride was endearing! I know have "A Whole New World" in my head and will likely have dreams of it. Thanks for that. :P Further, I like the idea of a choclate bouquet. Where may I order mine?
Is it in the books that Theo and Tracey date? Is Tracey even a "real" character? I've seen her name in other fic and she's always dating Theo. Interesting. (I read the books ages ago; sorry I can't recall that detail.)
I enjoyed the conversation about Draco's name and whether he will "live up to it." I think you can play around with that one for a while and it'll still be good.
I think her dormmates will suspect she has a secret beau soon. Or atleast a crush. I was slightly surprised that Draco admitted he was keeping a secret. That might not bode well for a secret romance.
Thanks for posting and good luck with the laptop/bed ordeal. From experience I can say---yeah, that's no fun at all. Meh. May I suggest a book under the laptop and then the book upon a pillow and many pillows behind your back? It helps, somewhat. For a while.
Good night all!
EEvans
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June 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I now have Aladdin stuck in my head, how epic would a magic carpet picnic be lol. post more soon!
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June 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
aww i loved the new date that they had:) just like out of a dream . miss granger has a naughty side that i am happily surprised about. this will make things interesting and i cant wait to read the next update
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June 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please, oh please, please, PLEASE keep this up. Exactly what your doing. Keep on keeping on, cause it is GOOD. I love how real, mature and raw you've made these two!
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June 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
was so excited to see this story updated!! i cant wait until they stay together :) i love the attraction between them. looking forward to the rest! good job
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June 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, why?
1.It's so funny, i love how Hermione and Draco argues, I have fun reading about them arguing that i actually understand how much they enjoy arguing with each other, it's all full of fun. You did a great job making the arguments
2.It's very realistic, the timeline is realistic, the way they argue is realistic, the conversations between friends are realistic, the characters are alive. I really lke how you paced the story.
3.The descriptions of the setting are just right, like what the secondary characters are doing, they are long enough for me to picture it happening but short enough not to bore me
I'm sure there are plenty more reasons, but those are at the top of my head. Thank you for writing this story and please keep writing, i really want to know what comes nexr. I've never written a review before but this story is so good, i just had to.
1.It's so funny, i love how Hermione and Draco argues, I have fun reading about them arguing that i actually understand how much they enjoy arguing with each other, it's all full of fun. You did a great job making the arguments
2.It's very realistic, the timeline is realistic, the way they argue is realistic, the conversations between friends are realistic, the characters are alive. I really lke how you paced the story.
3.The descriptions of the setting are just right, like what the secondary characters are doing, they are long enough for me to picture it happening but short enough not to bore me
I'm sure there are plenty more reasons, but those are at the top of my head. Thank you for writing this story and please keep writing, i really want to know what comes nexr. I've never written a review before but this story is so good, i just had to.
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June 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
YAY! An update, I'm so excited! I love this story so far!
Draco and Hermione's relationship is amazing, and even believable, which is hard to pull off.
I can't wait to see where this goes, how Dragon's will play into everything and just what new evil lurks! I do wonder if Draco has a creature inheritance and maybe Hermione is his mate, or maybe they are soul-mates and their are, literally, made for each other. I can't wait to see how everyone reacts to them as a couple, especially the boys and Draco's parents. I do hope Ron doesn't make too big of an ass of himself, I think Harry is mature enough to accept them as long as he knows Draco is treating Hermione well. Mr. and Mrs. Malfoy are a different hurdle all-together. You haven't really given us a run down of how they are coping with the end of the war and if they are still holding on to their old prejudice beliefs.
I also love that you are taking your time, it bothers me when characters have two meetings and then are suddenly in love, especially two characters that use to be rivals like Draco and Hermione. So, do take your time and let them naturally come into their relationship.
I cannot wait for the next chapter! <3
Draco and Hermione's relationship is amazing, and even believable, which is hard to pull off.
I can't wait to see where this goes, how Dragon's will play into everything and just what new evil lurks! I do wonder if Draco has a creature inheritance and maybe Hermione is his mate, or maybe they are soul-mates and their are, literally, made for each other. I can't wait to see how everyone reacts to them as a couple, especially the boys and Draco's parents. I do hope Ron doesn't make too big of an ass of himself, I think Harry is mature enough to accept them as long as he knows Draco is treating Hermione well. Mr. and Mrs. Malfoy are a different hurdle all-together. You haven't really given us a run down of how they are coping with the end of the war and if they are still holding on to their old prejudice beliefs.
I also love that you are taking your time, it bothers me when characters have two meetings and then are suddenly in love, especially two characters that use to be rivals like Draco and Hermione. So, do take your time and let them naturally come into their relationship.
I cannot wait for the next chapter! <3