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for No Outlet for Anger

by wherdatcomfrom

schedule October 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is such a fascinating idea!!! I can't wait to see what happens next and hope you update soon and often!!!
As far as the whole "Ginny being the bad guy" issue, I don't see a problem with it. SOMEONE has to be the bad guy. I have a set of one-shots where Ginny's a bitch about Harry and Draco being together. In another, much longer story, she's perfectly fine with it and even comments that it made sense why Harry never picked up on her advances. It all depends on what you need for the story and Ginny being the way she is makes complete sense for this one.

However, one thing I do agree with Janna on, is that I find it unlikely that Harry and Ginny would've actually ended up together. I have an entire argument for this, but I really don't feel like typing it all up at this moment. Whether anyone agrees with me or not, doesn't matter in the least.
person Janna
schedule September 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see how self-righteous Ginny is when Harry finally comes to his senses and leaves her stalker whore butt for a man, and not just any man but Draco Bloody Malfoy. I don't think Harry should have married Ginny in the first place really just how many people end up happily married to their stalker? As for calling her a whore if she truly loved Harry she should have waited for him I mean she was what 14 she couldn't wait a year or two for Harry. I mean she should have realized that the war and staying alive were for most in Harry's mind she had to know at least some of the things that Harry went through every year because not only is Ron his best friend but he is close with the twins and at least civil with Percy (at least before he broke away from the family. Not only that she her self is friends with Hermione. What truly surprises that she didn't know he was gay sooner think about it despite dating he he was still obsessed with Draco.
schedule September 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Jesus Christ, Ginny barely had a role beyond a few comments and already one rabid harry/draco shipper has bashed the fuck out of her in the reviews lol. While i don't condone Ginny's comments or the laws that have been placed in this fic as it makes the 'light' seem like hypocrites, some people have got to understand that the Malfoy's.....Draco included were no saints and war leaves scars and people hold on to grudges and while Ginny's comments make her come off as a hyper bitch, it doesn't make her a terrible human being because if the shoe was on the other foot and the good guys rolled snake eyes, you can bet that if the laws were for halfbloods, muggleborns and blood traitors that Draco would very well be saying similar things and being a fan of his doesn't mean you can overlook the fact that throughout most of canon he was an absolute shit, a very attractive shit, but a shit nonetheless. And as far as Ginny being a 'stalker' goes....beyond that indecent with the card in the second book which was made when she was still very young and had a bad case of hero worship/crush she spent the majority of the book being screwed with by Tom Riddles diary. In later books she didn't do anything that could be considered stalking and even moved on for a bit and dated other people....you know, like a REGULAR teenager and dating 2 or 3 guys over a period of time does not make someone a whore and it was Harry who planted one on her and thus made them official in the sixth book. And please offer some evidence on to the whole 'obsession' harry had for draco. This so called obsession took place during a year where harry KNEW malfoy was up to something and noone would believe him. Obsession does not always equal love/passion/lust w/e it could also just be an intense curiosity and need to prove that he is right rather than let malfoy get away with whatever he was planning. And Janna, i am honestly not trying to knock you as i also see the appeal in Harry/Draco pairings but Ginny is nowhere near as bad as fanon makes her out to be and is shown several times to be a pretty decent person and the paring between Harry and Draco could work for some people without having to butcher her character.

Whew..... ok now on to my real review. This is an intriguing start Anna and i am interested in seeing where this goes. The law is totally fucked up and I feel Azkaban for the guilty parties would have been enough since not all pure bloods were prejudiced and i am sure that there are many that chose to stay neutral for their family's. The good guys and the ones who were once persecuted have now become no better than the ones they have fought and only harry seems to realize this. And as i have mentioned i hope that you can pair harry and Draco up if that's your intention without having to character assassinate certain other individuals. This is a very good start, keep up the good work.
person thrnbrooke
schedule September 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Soooo can't wait to see where you take this!!!