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Re-read some and just read the rest. Fine story, going along well. Always like powerful Harry!! Still don't like Ginny but alright I'll go along with how your handling her (as if I had a choice) but please control Molly...another one I don't like (usually loud & mean/selfish). Love the mystery person Harry is trying to cure or get healthier! I hope it is Severus...that would be so terrific. I'm ready for you to get rid of Astoria (too bad because she didn't do anything) and Ginny (yea!)and bring Draco and Harry together and those mischievius two, Albus and Scorpius. P.S. I did't and still don't like Albus either...not at all!!

I am more than appeased. Glad your not going the route of "evil Ginny who everyone including her children hates". In most Drarry's that is the cop out most writers go for to make there pairing work. She fucked up here but hopefully things to end too badly and she realizes that holding on too her hate for former enemies isn't going to get her anywhere or help anyone.

Hmm so a conspiracy eh? People not just looking for payback but also to get more money and possessions. This story has a very interesting premise. A real grey/grey morality feel to it. It's a given that people would feel so much resentment after the war and try to get back at the pure blood families they feel deserve it but too take it this far won't help anyone. Just going to create more venom for themselves and the people the new laws effect and make the 'heroes' no better than the old regime they put down. Harry in this fic has that quality of forgiveness that many others with his past and in his position wouldn't have.

I take it that part about blood spells helping to preserve a line was a bit of foreshadowing?

I am usually very anti-Slytherin/Malfoy/pure-blood but you actually have me feeling somewhat sorry for them here, kudos.

Excellent update.

Just found this story and I really like it! The hatred of the pure-blooded and consequent laws leaves a community unable to forgive and forget - not a healthy society. One small thing: in chapter 7 you mention Narcissa's husband... but in the first chapter we're told that he was kissed?

Been a while, glad to see an update. A little sad that your going the 'Ginny cheats" road but I suppose there would have to be a reason for them to call it quits and open the way to future Drarry.

-waits patiently for the next chapter.

I found your story again!!! It's still a great read! I sooo wanted more.

I am really enjoying this story and am interested in seeing where you are going to take it. I think examining the reaction of the 'winners' of the war to the 'losers' is a theme that has not been explored enough. To be magnanimous in victory is not easy and takes strong leaders to achieve especially after what is in effect a civil war.

This is so sad!! And I don't see how it can be fixed with the way the laws are and no one seems to want to use their common sense. I bet there will be some serious angst coming up. I hope there is some hope and comfort for the children if not the grown ups. Sorry but just can't like Ron & Ginny. Yes I know she is a product of her suroundings BUT she has a brain and decision making ability! Same with Ron.

Welcome back, and another riveting chapter

I'm sort of feeling my way here as I'm one of those who really don't like Ginny and want Harry & Draco to be together. I know I read too many stories etc but that's how it is. I'm trying to just go with your story & be open minded...really hard. Like the boys very much but still having a hard time with their mothers. I know. I know. Scorpius' mother hasn't even done anything bad yet. I said I was trying..I'm just not there yet.

Ain't gonna lie, almost got some man tears going at the part with Lily and the budding friendship between Albus and Scorpius is sweet. Both are so innocent and have no idea as to why certain things have happened and it sucks that the new generation has to pay for the actions of the adults.