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I like it! I loved the Pride and Prejudice references too. I'm glad they were able to recruit Lucius to their side, even if he doesn't know what that side is.

Nice chapter. Love how Remy didn't even blink when he hit that guy. Totally deserved it though. Ah Lucius, how gullible you are. Granted it is true. So it balances out XD Snape and Seri...not sure if that is hot or odd..both perhaps. Good job though, I think you are at the very least pretty darn close to how they would act. I can only say pretty close since we don't know for sure lol. Looking forward to reading more!

Well Remus you outed yourself there buddy! and sev! interestding he says! oh I love this....

Hi,

Great story - I very much look forward to reading its progression and conclusion when the time comes. Can I encourage you to PLEASE KEEP WRITING!! I find myself constantly checking back to see if there's anything new to read in this story, I really want to know how it continues and how you weave the Remus/Hermione story line/interest into it - dont be nervous about that plot line, just give it to us hook line and sinker, we all love it!!

Wonderful!

Damn thing destroying my post lol. Figures the one time I forget to save...all well. Sorry you had a bad day and I hope tomorrow is better for you! Yay on the longer chapter though, that is always nice ^^ I love your reason for Seri poisoning sev, and how you switched the secrets like that. That was funny! Makes it a lot harder to go, "oh I don't care if that secret is told anymore" because now its their friends secrets. I wonder, since Hermione is now a pureblood, are they going to have to teach her how to act like one, or does she have access to the memories of that knowledge?

That last line by Severus was priceless! Lol! Looks like Hermione is doing what she does best: cajole, badger and nag people into doing the right thing!

Oh gods, Sev you are priceless. This was a great chapter. I love how Hermione is unifying them all and using blackmail on the boys. And how she starts out by pointing out all their strengths. That way, no one can pull the "well I know why I am here, but why is HE here" card...they are going to have a blast with the ROR XD. Is Lucius still in school at this point? I know that he was ahead grade and age wise of Sev by at least a couple years. So I can't remember, if he is, I hope he avoids Moine XD Looking forward to reading more!

oh wow poor girl well poor everyonre but things can be changed thart is good but how much can?

For Ron/Draco's death, have him be raped by Greyback, than eaten alive by the Werewolves. Draco because he betrayed Voldybutt at the last minute. Ron because he was caught by Greyback and other werewolves. Can you make it a flashback in a dream of Hermione's? I'm sick I know that