AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Academy of Pleasure and Pain

by mysticxox

schedule October 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Totally forgot about the wand thing lol, it only just occurred to me that they didn't have them.Looks like Luna is in for a ride and while i read this for the delicious glorious smut, I am curious on what the endgame is of the academy, to perhaps train willing sex slaves, produce a more promiscuous way of society, or just some sick kick Lucius came up with while plowing his way through a plethora of nubile young virgins.

Lucius-"hmm hey Narcissa, be a dear and Contact Severus would you..........I just had a bitchin idea"(resumes fornicating)

....ahem maybe i am reading to much into it lol. Also is the majority of the non elite populace in the school composed of blood traitors and Muggleborns? And is this the alternative instead of just killing them off?
person Anon
schedule October 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I thought this chapter rocked!
I wish you could write as fast as I can read - this story is becoming rather addictive!
schedule October 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, really enjoyed it (Chapter 6),
You managed to put my hard nipples and my vagina wet well,
But we need more of this.
Trust me, as a teacher of dominatrices Bellatrix will be perfect!
With how crazy is safe teaches all the girls to have iron vagina, with men!
person Snapelover
schedule October 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great as ever.
Snape and Lucius...mmm...she is one lucky witch!
schedule October 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story is a whole new twist on things.
I like it.
So is Hermione one of Snape's favorites?
Oh and I can't remember if you mentioned or not but how do the girls not get pregnant from all the guys cumming in them?
Can't wait for another chapter :)
schedule October 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
....you magnificent bastard..........

epic as always and whats the current population of the academy, i understand the age of 18 is when you go there but how many witches/wizards have been sent?
schedule October 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
"continued from previous review"

love the O.C btw, she is perfect :D
person TheMaidenoftheKing
schedule October 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I want to be Hermione in this chapter! Hummm
Hardcore sex with two very well gifted man. A dream!
With difficult, you found only one.
person TheMaidenoftheKing
schedule October 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think it is unfair that only men are the dominators but understand that they are physically, to be stronger.
I would like to that turn came, the girls are dominatrixes.
Now, you can include classes teaching techniques Sprout and McGonagall F / F, as a well described scissors. They are so neglected the scissors and all focus on the penetration, I know it is more pleasant but the girls behave different between us.
How about if Bellatrix, include it as a teacher of girls, domineering and practicing techniques with the most advanced.
person TheMaidenoftheKing
schedule October 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Damn it! When will be the rematch of the girls! When they graduate to the next semester and then the boys will be tied?
I mainly want to see Severus, bound and taken by all the girls one after the other and using whips and toys for him to come and secondly to Lucius.
Please, Remus having a hottest scene with Hermione, they both will enjoy.
I hope not to bother you with my suggestions!