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for Academy of Pleasure and Pain

by mysticxox

schedule October 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant as always, you just keep getting better and better. Curious to see how the other girls/boys are broken and if any will resist no matter what and if we will see any more familiar faces. Perhaps even bring in Fleur in a teaching capacity similar to Remus since she was on the losing side and could have been threatened to be at the academy. Being a quarter Veela would give her quite an edge in the seduction department. It would also be interesting to see Lavender(if she lived) at the academy and Hermione being put in charge of breaking her, given their history. You could also do an angle where a student tries to escape the school.
person Anon
schedule October 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good one!
Does the academy admit only human magical folk or other magical creatures aswell? If Lupin is there do students learn to pleasure a wolf?
person Anon
schedule October 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Don't leave us here! Quick write the next chapter!!!
schedule October 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think Narcissa must teach the elegant sex, girls, so they know to please their partner. How to achieve arousal without hands but with the physical behavior.
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person Anon
schedule October 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice one - If your characters had to make a choice and choose their partners and lessons what would they choose? HG in particular?
person imlovingdan
schedule October 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this story from the beginning and I know Harry was killed but I'm curious what happened to Ron. I'm a fan of Neville's and wondering if he will be in your story
schedule October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
inquisitive curious! Of course I know what happened to Uric, a massive violation and man-made, ie an M / M.
But it is unfair, only the elite get to use others. Why do not all enjoy all. Might not have pain? I do not think, even in relationships Dom / Sub,
both coexist and very, PLEASURE, THINK ABOUT IT!
That Hermione did not like, is that she is a fool! But should she strive to be the dominant one, so always win!
I think for my benefit, and I will not read, always leave me shaking and you can imagine where.
Thanks always satisfactory.
schedule October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i am sad to see Remus soo...whats a good word...calm and uninterested. I would love to see him a bit on the kinky side!!
person SnapeLover
schedule October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I read this a couple of hours ago but forgot to review so here I am!
Really good chapter. I like the F/F action with Hermione and Pansy. Who would have thought?
Yes-more on the OC although I can kind of imagine what's happening to him. Please let more teachers be involved. How about Narcissa?
Is she going to be teaching a class?
Great so far! ;)
person Clara
schedule October 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to find out what happened when Hermione first joined.

The chapter was great.

Maybe you should write a chapter where the parents come to visit. Some of which know what is happening while offers not so much. Hermione's mother and father and maybe an OC sister, Amelia bones, Tonks, Fleur, etc

Love the story, keep it up