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Ah...ok...I probably shouldn't say anything but I was reading a few of the reviews and I saw @AeonFlux4444 had an interesting one -_- (that's the polite term!)
Not sure what to think except I'm really enjoying this story and I like the way you showed Hermione and Ginny changing.
Maybe Hermione will become one of the 'elite' too? But it takes longer than Ginny since she's more resistant?
So, in summary, I disagree with the other review.
You're doing a great job so keep it up! And as much as I love whips, I'm not sure if inflicting pain on them will make them break faster. Isn't humiliation the main thing?
Another great chapter and remember, you can't please everyone! ;)

Question: Did he have Lupin or did Lupin have him? Kinky either way!!

Really happy Fleur will come in eventually. Hoping to see Tonks aswell.

Those girls need to be dominated :)

Loving how the story is coming along

I see you deleted the crazy Bellatrix and it's funny to see the false elegant, Cissy crawl on the floor to practice a bondage rather was a blowjob to Mudblood, enjoying it more than anyone.
Believe it, you have not shown that they broke Hermione because she enjoys it, is different from wanting to do it in any other person, as they do.
This is not the Academy of pleasure, is the little school the sketches pornos.
You can improve! I doubt there are many falsehoods about pleasure-pain, who knows, it's funny!
I'm not saying take out the whip and leather outfits, but ... If not yet know is hard to explain to neophytes.

(Returns from cold shower) you....are so delightfully twisted lol.

well now we know the fates of some of the characters, pity about molly and the others. Was Fluer amongst those killed as i inquired in a previous review or will she be making an appearance? Also another thing that has sprung to my mind, is this academy filled with only the students who attended Hogwarts or are other school teens being brought in as well. Any chance we will see Hermione's old Bulgarian ex in the future? :D :D

Really hoping to see a good bondage and punishment scene soon. Maybe one of the girls tried to escape or something.

Hot, very very hot, interesting form of "punishment" lol.

I think the temperature of the room just went up!
Very hot. More please! :D

Please update faster!!!
Great chapter and I love how you still stick to the kinky stuff and not on developing a complex plot.
It's what makes your story different to the countless other erotica ones I've read so keep at it! And have I mentioned...update soon! :D

this is interesting and i feel bad for Luna...is Ginny going to join the elite first or is Hermione?