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for Academy of Pleasure and Pain

by mysticxox

schedule October 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
holy hell, can't decide on whether to be jealous of Ron or sad at his fate lol. Sucks that it was his own family to betray him though.
schedule October 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is kind of like a soap opera....i've only been reading a few chapters and always know whats going on. I kinda like that. This chapter was interesting I'm more looking forward to Lupins kinky side and would LOVE Hermione finally give in to her own as well... From the start of this fic i just KNEW Ginny would excel in this new school...hahaha. I just read Fifty Shades of Grey...ahhh gotta love the submissive side!
person Ro
schedule October 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've read this story since the beginning and have loved every chapter. Looking forward to Ginny's elite testing and seeing what she does. It would be kinda neat to have Ginny teach Hermione what Odetta taught her (or bring Odetta back, I'm not picky). I also can't wait for Hermione to become ruthless like Ginny has and I see what her elite testing would include, maybe Luna? I look forward to reading each new chapter and keep re-reading the entire story because I enjoy it so much.
person XOXO
schedule October 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yayayay! Ron! I love it! :D
person jadestar114
schedule October 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
More Fred and George please!
schedule October 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
lovey dovey stuff ain't usually my cup of tea......but damn it you made it work with this one, kudos. Sucks to be Ron though depending on his fate lol. Another awesome chapter and you have a real talent for smut :D :D :D

And AeonFlux4444, not to be a dick but you should really structure out your reviews a little better. They kind of jump all over the place.

person SnapeLover
schedule October 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is starting to make me like characters I never really thought about before. That's talent :D
Parvati and Charlie...delicious!
I'm wondering about Ron now. Can't wait to see what you have in store for him! ;)
Oh and when are we going to see Lupin again? And Snape? I'm addicted to this story..
schedule October 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ah quite a twist you pulled there. Seems a few people have fully switched sides and i hope those rumors aren't true cause if so i fear for Parvati. Smoking Hot writing as always but used the word 'member' a bit too much, the occasional cock/dick/penis is alright from time to time.


(waits patiently for next chapt
person AeonFlux4444
schedule October 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I see you've understood the concept of pleasure-pain-pleasure!. Okay, now all enjoy but do not admit it, it's strange that you can put to Hermione a little teacher as Blaise and not a Master as she requires.
Instead Patil sisters are delivered to the concept and enjoy!
The Weasleys have always been a mess for me: upstarts.
person XOXO
schedule October 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Omg omg omg omg omg!!!!
First of all, it's RON! (Right?) Can't wait.
Second, omg, Hermione and Blaise again, yayyy!
Last, so excited for the Ginny situation. Kinda wondering about Draco though. Their relationship is... Confusing.
Ooooommmmgggg. I get too excited for this stuff. It's not okay.