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Did somebody say Draco Malfoy? I caught it, I was just waiting until I finished reading what you had. And I completely agree! Those musicals are treasured gold. Love this story!

OMG I'm loving this so far! So Harry has family and Dumbledore is an ass...Hey I love those types. Especially when it contains Snarry (okay, so we're including Draco and Lucius too, I can tolerate that); I also like the creature inheritances aren't limited to only a small handful. That is almost over done, and I really love your OCs. Pick ONE?! You must be joking, I love them all so far! Jaden, Harry's other 'parent', will be helpful in getting Voldemoret and Bella's mental states sorted out, and I can't wait to see what happens to Dumbledore. So this person that rejected Dumbledore, yet came back after she drowned...did I understand that correctly or did I miss something? The only person so far (other than Nora) that is pregnant is Mrs. Granger, so it's either Nora or her...unless it's someone else that hasn't made an apperance yet, in which case I'm way off. I look forward to more, expect an e-mail requesting to be put on the mailing list.

Leania

Nice development on the story line although I am most anxious to get back to our quad (and Draco getting caught)!

I am enjoying the various elements you are pulling from - and I don't necessarily mean the fire and water!

WOW! Let's see if I got this right:
Darverius (HP); Merman (SS); 2 Feyen (LM/DM)
Darverius (Marcus), Vampire (Alstair), Wizard (Braiden), Siren (RW)
Werewolf (RL); fire elemental (HG)
water elemental (Arthur); is Nora a Darverius?
Bastet (Emilia); Vampire (Viktor) + submissive missing mates (2 ?)
Twin Darverius(?) Adal & Teegan; twin sirens (GW/FW)
Jaden (Darverius) is mates with Bella and Donovan (LV) but has never met them
Damian (submissive Darverius) - mates ?

I am not even going to try and go a family branch higher on Marcus, Emilia, Viktor and Nora!

Hope you continue as I am obviously hooked!!!

could you pls e/m me when you update! Thanks!

truly enjoying this story! Feel lucky to have found it!

WOWOWOWOWOWOW - I like, I like!!!!! Reading on....

I really really really love this story! Its been agonizing waiting for you to update it! Very well written by the way. Love the way that you paired up everybody ;D I got so excited by your email, since I thought that you had written the next chapter. It's not that I didn't love the new version or anything, I just really want to know what happens next. Please update as soon as you can. PLEASE!! I'm sure that I'm not the only one that is dying, waiting for you to write more of this story XD

I'm really enjoying your story and would love to be informed of new chapters.
I found it very interesting choice of characters. It's the first time I read a fic where Harry is dominant. And of course I can not help cometar I love stories where a character has several companions, pity I did not find them easily ... Any suggestions?
Well, I live in Brazil and I write fics too ...
Congratulations on your story.
Kisses.
Josi

think the last chap worked out pretty well, other than the fact that harry and sev had fooled around back at the beginning and sev acted like he hadn't experienced it before, other than that, thought it was great. i loved the rescue scene from teh last chapter, and i'm curious who viktor's two subs are if ron and the twins are now taken... ginny and damien maybe? either way, keep up teh good work, i look forward to mroe :)