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Yay! A new chapter! Remus is just so darn CUTE. I wonder how Hermione will take the new...anyways, looking forward to reading more!

ahhh... I thought Draco would be with Harry first... isn't Harry the alpha? He might not like them starting something without him.

i remember this story! or at least a few more chapters of it lol. once again, really good story so far and i look forward to re-reading the coming chapters :)

Hehe I'm glad you are revamping it:) I love the newest update. Can't wait to read what the next update!

Now in this chapter I can see the difference!! It is slower!! Haha, it really is more realistic... now they just don't jump....to more pleasurable activities haha, my freaking heart was pounding in anticipation!!! Well, cliffhangers, can't say I don't hate them.... but I know you are on a sort of spree right now, so I know that I waon't be waiting for too long!!!

love the new chapter, and love that you update quickly at the moment its always torture to have to wait long for a good story to continue and you have a great story that i will be eagerly awaiting the update of.

Yay! Another chapter! I am loving Sev more and more. Wicked job on his looks. Poor Draco, so desperate for his connection he wore himself out. That is so sweet. Geeze, dumbles is just evil. I really liked this chapter and am so impatient for more! This story is great already! Thank you for fixing the second chapter btw.

I really like the story. It may not be 'good' but it IS decent so far and it is only expected that you improve with time as it ususally happens with authors and their fics. The pace of the story is a little too fast, but not by much, but the plot seems interesting. I just wish you would pay more attention to characters, their personality, and try to keep them IC as much as possible while molding them the plot's needs. I really hope it is not a dom!Harry story as I ust can't imagine him to be a top with anyone other than women ;) You are doing decent job of the fic, keep it up and please update soon :)

I love the revamped story so far :) And this is a request to please leave me on your mailing list :) The email is charlie-becks@manx.net I can't wait for more :)

You are totally spoiling your readers! Loved this chapter! My heart beat so fast when I realised you were already at your fourth chapter! Please update soon! I'm so happy that Draco and Sev finally made the connection with Harry. I hope there won't be too much complications!