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Great chapter! I'm glad that Severus is close by now. Is there a specific reason he's so fearful? Or is it just his natural caution. Anyway, keep up the good work and thanks for writing,

I love this chapter! I also hate it at the same time XD It was great, don't get me wrong, but I want to jump in and throttle dumbledore while doing my best impression of Bella laughing as he turns as blue as his robes. What a horrible old man! I wouldn't be surprised if he was a perv too. You know, if Harry is worried about the Weasley's, he could always visit the Goblins and get the key to one of his other properties and let them live there for safety while making it so dumbles can't get to him. Bet they would love to have a big house where they aren't piled on top of each other. It could even be furnished, or unfurnished so they can move all their stuff there. Also, something I noticed at the start when Harry found the book, you wrote "could" instead of "couldn't" read it. Other then that, didn't notice any mistakes. If Harry doesn't want to scare Lucius off, he could always send Sev to talk to him, as they are friends. Anyways, good job, can't wait for more!

and so sev moves in. i hope he relaxes a bit. any stiffer and he'd be a statue.

Uh oh seems like lucius will be the stubborn on in the group and poor sev :(
Great story can't wait for another update I'm obsessed!

awww Harry and Snape's little moment was sooooooo cute :D
So now he knows about Lucius.... dun dun dunnnnnnn lol
I hope Harry will get a chance to explain himself.
Well post more sooooon please!!!!

It's been so long since I've been back here because I was so busy and now so many chapters! I hope you keep updating! the Scene with Lucius and Draco was hot!!! And I'm so happy Harry got Sev!! I hope lucius don't continue being so stubborn! Please please please update soon!

Loving this revamp... keep going...

I'll keep this short 'cause I don't know if my Kindle will let me review at all (haven't had much luck with that). I'm liking this but it seems to me that Harry is coming to some realizations without much in the way of logical connections. For example, Matterhorn tells him that Bellatrix was engaged to Dorian Darkwing but married Rodolphus Lestrange, after which the wizarding world began hearing about someone called Tom Riddle, and from that Harry deduces that Dorian and Voldemort are the same person? Seems like a really big jump to me.

As I said before, I'm liking this story and intend to keep reading it. I just feel that perhaps certain elements are being rushed and not explained as well as they could be.

Well, as I have never read this, I didn't notice the missing bit...but either way. Great chapter XD Harry seems to be having a lot of fun with his new found well...everything lol. He should ask Sev about people he can trust or not. As a spy, Sev would know a lot. Plus, as a mate, he needs to know the truth. Looking forward to reading more!

Love the interaction between Draco and lucius yum!
Update soon please! Love love this story!