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October 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ermmm... that went well... not. what a mess. I guess luc couldn't handle hearing those home truths. at least draco seems okay with things but i don't think har will settle for two outta three. not sure how he'll get through to luc though.
good grief that family tree's a bit confusing. Making family trees are hard. neh, is tonks dead, divorced or both?
good grief that family tree's a bit confusing. Making family trees are hard. neh, is tonks dead, divorced or both?
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October 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting idea to have the subs become feral if they have to much control. It allows them to still seem like dominants, and in a way still be one and thus be themselves, while not being one. After all, a world of purely subs/doms is just..boring and predictable. Lot of mistakes in this chapter though, like "come" being "dome" and "cum" being "sum" during the sex scene. A lot of her/she for he/he's as well. Other then that, great job, looking forward to more.
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October 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
poor harry! he lost a mate and too much blood! more when you can hun! I emailed you
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October 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is far different then anything I've read so far in this fandom. Still figuring everything out including what I think.
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October 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That clift hanger was pure evil, just evil. And boy the showdown with Luc and Harry is going to epic. Great chapter...
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October 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Omgg evil ending! Update soon please!
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October 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU DID THAT!!! YOU "KILL" OFF HARRY AND THEN JUST LEAVE??? You are so mean! :(
But, thank you for another marvelous chapter! Can't wait for the next update!
But, thank you for another marvelous chapter! Can't wait for the next update!
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October 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another nice chapter, lots going in and stupid lux still be stubborn. Lots of spelling issues in this chap though. Otherwise, nice work, keep iy up
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October 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
another nice chapter (and yay for smut and flustered dracos lol). quite a few spelling errors throughout though not bad enough to change the meaning of a sentence. think i might have found the original version of this over at hpfandom again too if you're the same author at least. keep up the good work, i look forward to more :)
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October 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very, very nice scene. Falling in love with MermanSeverus!
Must have more!
Must have more!