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for Angel in My Head

by Aridethdar

person she-who-waits-in-darkness
schedule October 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey it is kinda harsh to find out that you dump me as a beta ,and didn't even mention me in the first to chapters like you did your new beta. But the story is good and I will not rid myself of a good story because you have bad manners.
person Lori
schedule October 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The story seems very interesting thus far, yet it seems too early to make any literary criticisms, so keep up the good work, and cannot wait to read more :3
schedule October 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love it so far! Will be looking forward to see what happens to Harry in the limelight. I always did love Harry having pro-active stance for improving his standing in the wizarding world. Does Voldemort know about the shard in Harry? Either way I'm sure it will be awesome. Until the next chapter!
schedule October 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love this story and I like the different way that "Fallen" is doing things this time, even Dark Lord's can learn...lol. Brilliant! story and I look forward to more.
person heartstar
schedule September 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
interesting more please!
person chrissy
schedule September 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Cool story!! please add me to your updates list. thanks cadibley@hotmail.com
person unneeded
schedule September 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ya know, all things considered... how likely was it that canon har would put himself through hell with no support beyond a brainiac and a jealous ginger and then offer himself up on a platter for the world? i know the ww is pretty backward but they offered him no support at all in dealing with some pretty messed up stuff. Any normal person would have pitched bitch fits, run away a couple of times and so on. No, canon har just soldiered on. yay for FF which presents a slightly more realistic and /or pervy, humorous etc view
Voice did raise some pretty good points though. I wonder what nudged Har'crux awake.
looking forward to next chappie.
person she-who-waits-in-darkness
schedule September 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hit me up i like the intro and i luv to beta.
person imsandir
schedule September 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sounds interesting so far...looking forward to more!!!