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Please say you are continuing this story? I love it and look forward to reading more.

Lovely story so far, I believe I worked "Bel's secret".... I noticed how she asked to be called Bel and subtle reference to her mental health. Am I close? Anyway back on topic; story is very well thought out and I so do love a Dumble bashing plus be interesting how Weasleys come over in your story too. I always personally believed Harry was a gray wizard more but never got chance to explore.

Nice introduction of the the psychologist, though I enjoy how much the Horcrux within Harry becomes the Angel. I may not have mentioned that before in other reviews, but I have to admit that it is one of the newer approaches I have seen to the fanfiction involving a Harry Potter and Lord Voldemort pairing. Or at least in one, where Harry is not aware that the voice is Voldemort's horcux. Can't wait for the newest chapter :D

Please update its really starting to get me interested

well, at least har isn't fighting Fallen/har crux on this now. Which is good cause oh MY does har need to get OUT of there. I do like your oc's. crazy phsych ladies are fun. (has one of my own though mine isn't crazy.) I look forward to seeing what this game is... and those two's reaction to hars 'bedroom'. Neh, in canon, wasn't he moved to the second bedroom by now?
thanks for picking up the thing on the blood wards... i've always thought that was a bit of a plot hole in canon. If i were voldi, no 1 on my list would've been hunt down harry bloody potters summer home and kill him a LOT!

I really like both this story and You can't be serious hope you keep updating quickly, very very good :) I also like that in this story they all seem to have assumed that harry is younger than Dudley and his gang rather than the same age group.

This is off to a really great start. I love how you're doing this. I'm definitely keeping my eyes open for more :)

Interesting new take on Harry and his life and I'm very intrigued to see where you are going to take it from here. One thing though - and I hope you won't mind me pointing it out: Harry lives in England, so the scene with the police and the weapons - a definite 'no-no'. Our street police, the ones who routinely patrol neighbourhoods, don't carry firearms: the public outcry would be horrendous. We do have special armed response units, though even they have to have specific permission before they can so much as wave a loaded weapon in a public area. The scene is nicely written, but the gun part jars and makes it totally non-canon. That said, I'm going to be waiting with anticipation for your next chapter ... 'Purr

Can't wait for the next installment :D.

wow, harcrux is a bit of a bastard huh... though considering where he split off from that's perfectly understandable. Still, it's slyth thinking. if it can't be avoided, a bit of pain now for a max of payback later. though, har was in more than a bit of pain. still and all, i'm betting after this gets out not even dumbles can wrangle sending him back to the dursleys... That manipulative old prick better watch himself or he's gonna get done for child abuse and neglect.