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October 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #6..
Hahaha...you know when Draco lifted that fork, I was like, 'Just
go for it Harry!', then I thought Harry would have hexed my ass
for saying it. :-)
Then Harry goes and 'sucks' the joy out of a good time. *shakes head*
Could he be more of a killjoy?
All in all, finally some action!
Hahaha...you know when Draco lifted that fork, I was like, 'Just
go for it Harry!', then I thought Harry would have hexed my ass
for saying it. :-)
Then Harry goes and 'sucks' the joy out of a good time. *shakes head*
Could he be more of a killjoy?
All in all, finally some action!
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October 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this! I hope you update again soon!
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October 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
They are finally getting the idea. Harry keeps thinking/feeling what a dumb spoiled brat Draco is. I think Harry is worse.
He or they really just need to settle down & cut out thinking like they are kids at Hogwarts. Harry talks & acts like Hermione & Ron are perfect be all end alls while Draco is garbage. I know they are the 1st friends Harry had but geez..
he could make more friends if he didn't make everyone else feel unworthy. As always, enjoy your writing. You always come up with great story ideas!
He or they really just need to settle down & cut out thinking like they are kids at Hogwarts. Harry talks & acts like Hermione & Ron are perfect be all end alls while Draco is garbage. I know they are the 1st friends Harry had but geez..
he could make more friends if he didn't make everyone else feel unworthy. As always, enjoy your writing. You always come up with great story ideas!
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October 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
poor malfoy... is that all it takes to get him hard? still, patronus sort of got through, that's hopeful right?
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October 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
honey hair *snicker*
I'm surprised that Draco admitted that to Harry. And that the kitchen cupboards didn't burst open with food at the progress lol
I'm surprised that Draco admitted that to Harry. And that the kitchen cupboards didn't burst open with food at the progress lol
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October 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much!
What I'm getting from this chapter is that Harry is in denial about his gay tendencies, whether he's gay or bi. Is that correct?
What I'm getting from this chapter is that Harry is in denial about his gay tendencies, whether he's gay or bi. Is that correct?
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October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh poor Harry! He 'could have seen something'! lol That was hilarious... Harry spazzing out because he might see Draco naked lol. I also loved how he did his imitation of a 'squashed spider'... hilarious imagery that was totally perfect :)
Interesting that they touched on the subject of Snape since they would each have totally different views of him... and they are both right.
Interesting that they touched on the subject of Snape since they would each have totally different views of him... and they are both right.
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October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is a really great piece of fiction. The characters and the plot are developing at a good pace, and the little bouts of humour you throw in are fantastic. I can't wait to read more and see the development of Harry and Draco's relationship!
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October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
stereotypical indeed. obviously the misfired spell doesn't factor in that even lovers will want a break from each other from time to time. a moment or two of solitude to collect thoughts and so on. rather harsh dumping them down like that. If they get seriously injured somehow or attempt to injure each other in er... blazing passion, will the house intervene? I've known some couples who, while they do indeed love each other dearly, have blazing, possibly stuff flinging rows.
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October 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, patronus can get out. That's hopeful at least and they have an exercise pool at least. Do they have a training room?
Poor har, all that confinement as a kid has made him rather anti confinement as an adult. he'll cope I think, but it won't be easy. Well, at least it won't be as awkward being in house that assumes you're lovers and does it's best to promote that with malfoy than it would be with say Ron? Har and Draco don't really know each other but they can learn... they'll have too.
Poor har, all that confinement as a kid has made him rather anti confinement as an adult. he'll cope I think, but it won't be easy. Well, at least it won't be as awkward being in house that assumes you're lovers and does it's best to promote that with malfoy than it would be with say Ron? Har and Draco don't really know each other but they can learn... they'll have too.