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for The House That Lovers Built

by Lomonaaeren

person monkey lady
schedule December 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love everything you write. I hope you're writing things you can published for sale. :)
schedule December 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I get that Harry is unsure about how he feels for Draco as a lover because of the way that they got together, but I feel rather sorry for Draco. His inability to want to see that Harry's friends are important to them and the hit to Harry were really childish and demanding. He seems rather spoiled in this chapter, and that was something that I didn't think about when reading the other chapters.
I do hope that they can get beyond this fracas now that they're free and can come to terms with what really happened between them. Once Harry stopped fighting it, they were rather good as a team. That's what he needs to remember, not Draco's little spat.
person Katlin Malfoy
schedule December 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
are theyout of the house :O or just in an illusion the house made why is draco being so stubborn i wanna iunh him harry is trying nd draco is shooting his ideas down for life outside the house uuughh but still loooveee it
schedule December 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
well, there's spectacularly sucky timing. just as they were having their first couple y blazing row. not to mention malfoy is still suspect. they'll have to work bloody hard at it if they want their relationship to survive outside the hot house.
person delia cerrano
schedule December 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I could just kick Harry but I Kind of also understand where he is coming from. Draco is more secure in his emotions. Harry
because of his upbringing (no parents, the Dursleys, etc) is less sure of emotions & more dependent on his friends. I've always thought he gave way too much importance to his friends to the point that he seems to allow them to control his activities & way he looks at things. I think that's` what Draco is afraid of - that his friends control him & won't let Draco into their golden circle - and GAY? are you nuts! He can't be gay. They won't let him. After all he's to be with Ginny or Cho orrr?? I hate when there is a lot of angst but little to no happy to offset it. You didn't ask but I'm just saying.
schedule December 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh! please say that no one is there watching as they lay there naked?
schedule November 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i can understand where he's coming from. in that sort of hothouse situation, it's really hard to pick what's real and whats exaggerated by the situation... especially as the house is quite literally doing all it can to push those feelings.
person delia cerrano
schedule November 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good to see another chapter, especially a sexy one that goes into what they are thinking. It really will be interesting to see how they relate to each other when they get out. I imagine at first Harry will run. Hope they're smarter but I'm thinking he will run...fast..making ugly comments or more likely let Granger & Ron make hurtful remarks. Then he will start to think & feel & realize what he thinks & feels and go looking for him. Draco will just be very quiet & take whatever then leave making Harry feel like a heel(I hope). Hope he makes Harry work for it when he comes around all "sorry they didn't mean it & I should have stopped them & stuck up for us". But what do I know? I just love Harry & Draco so much.
schedule November 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's been a minute since I've found time to stalk one of your stories, but I must say that I found the right one. A house that is forcing Harry and Draco to be lovers. Yum-my. I do love how Draco can sense what the house wants more than Harry does, but I can understand Harry's reluctance to admit that it could last outside of the house. Especially since Harry and Draco haven't exactly been friends before now. I loved the scene in the pool where they had to call each other by their personal names. It's so much better when you're having sex with someone to call them by their first name instead of the family name. I wait for the new chapter with baited breath. Oh, and kudos to Harry for not telling Hermione about the blood magic. She *would* try to lecture instead of seeing it as useful and expedient.
schedule November 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love the fact that you aren't letting them get away with just using physical actions coax their way out. If the house let them out this easily, it would look as if Draco wasn't the great potions master he claims to be. I also hope his other potion isn't a complete failure, but doesn't quite solve their problem.
Great story, as always. I bow to you.

Anna