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for Sirius Black and the 5th Book

by Ashray

schedule January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This just tickled me pink i was in near hysterics the whole time reading it. your sense of humor is just way to funny i defiantly like the twist about the whole trio switching sides and what not and i really loved the insanity in Sirius just way to funny thanks for a great story i needed it tonight
schedule September 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ahahaha! This is really funny XD and Sirius is really cute.

One thing about this story though, the way you have spaced your story is kida crowded and makes it less 'appealing' to read. Maybe but a space between each line of dialogue.

I love how you have described Sirius in his dog form, however, the tantrum does go on for a bit and some people will lose interest at the length.

BUT. very, very funny. You have a great sense of humour