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Nathaniel and Ryr

i go for snape, the bunny brothers and nate. nate cause har rescued him and is likely to be possessive, the bunny bro's cause they have super sub tasty little snacks written all over them (instead of colin and dennis they should be called coney and dinner. :P )and snape cause it would be absolutely hilarious.
is some finally going to explain stuff to har instead of letting the poor guy muddle along on his own? a king huh, well damn... does that mean har has to follow their laws too as well as WW ones?
also, with those he calls as ?, potential mates, whatever, does that mean he still has to go to the mate meet? Bit rough emotional black mailing them like that. come or be shunned. what happens if they're sick or injured? or if they're still struggling with the whole critter instincts and make over?

Another wonderful chapter- things speeding up, interesting cliffy.

CANT WAIT!!!!!!

OH NOESSSS A CLIFFY. :(

jks. This is so exciting!! CALLING- EEK HOT GUYS, lol.

Looking forward SO MUCH to the next chapter-- UGGHH ANOTHER WEEK!!!

:P Oh well, happy to wait. Especially as this is such a well written fic.

ack! you evil writer you! you do love doing this to us. another nice chapter and i'm actually liking the almost-action between harry and ryr. and the reaction to the perfume was great. can't wait to see who it was that was grabbed and what happens to the other kid and harry. keep up the good work :D

...read and run is a good option when the author constantly cliffhangs... ;_______;

<3 Wednesdaay

@10 things are getting interesting. Harry needs some action I think!

Please update soon

DB

good grief, what were that little group of twits up to?! obviously that last guy is just not right in the head.
so, despite the potion and whatever it did, har's instincts are still not quite on line.
it's a pity ryr can't go. must be quite lonely in the lack by himself.

blinks... good grief, is it just me or did a crap ton of stuff just happen in that chappie.

rather fumbled recovery there snape... definitely not worthy of an ex spy. :P

most interesting... what was that chibi shadow. so much review fodder for question asking in this chappie. ^^

well, that's just craptabulous, how in the worlds did he manage to maim himself?! lucky he's got a good friend in Ryr.

i think poor har is well aware that he could use training in the pure blood stuff.

well, that bodes bad things. it may just be that har needs a mio instituted jail brake after all. definitely what one would expect when they go to sort out legal stuffs.

What a weird story. Hope you update again soon.