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Draco and Sev and Charlie!

I wanted you to know that your story seems to be going well, and I hope you continue to write it. As for the census: I am unsure if the Colin/Denis as a package counts as both points, but I want them and Severus. Or if the package count as both points: Severus and Colin. I will not give up a sevviepoo for anything, even the cuteness that is Denis!

another wonderful chapter, couple typos (though i liked the healing "slave" *snicker*). and i liked all the different reactions to harry and i think you did a wonderful job with snape and draco and their absolute reluctance to deal with things. i see fun times ahead for harry lol (or maybe i should say *cackles evilly*). btw, in your census thingy, you didn't actually say what we're voting on though i'm assuming it's who's going to be his first mate. and who's this nathaniel kid? anyway, keep up the good work, i'm looking forward to more :D

omg, was reading some of the reviews, and "bunny bros" from unneeded!!!! i laughed my ass off cause i kept thinking of them the same way, they're just so sweet and innocent and corruptible *dies laughing*. since i forgot to throw in my vote...um? i agree with another reviewer, poor charlie never gets enough face time (and i really like a work-scarred, muscled and tattooed charlie *hinthint* lol) but i'm wondering how/when he's goign to play into the story line as it is so far. i agree with another one that this nathaniel kid already kind of has an in as harry just saved him. snape should kind of be last in the mates i think just to give harry a challenge in trying to win him over as nate, colin and dennis are pretty much a sure bet. since ryr already has a special assignment, i can't pick him, otherwise i'd give him first place lol, the chemistry between the two is just so nummy. if you do the bunny bros, you should do them as a set i think, no fair corrupting one without the other lol. so i guess charlie (1pt), nate (1pt), col/dennis, snape is my order of preference.

All of them

blast, i really cant read instructions. coulda swaorn it said 3. oopsie... >> well in that case. i dunno nate so i can give him up easy. snape and the bunny bro's. snape definitely. har needs some who'll challenge him... besides, he already knocked down sev's inner walls. ^^ i we knew a bit more about nate i'd consider him in the bunny bro's place, but i don't. *shrugs.

I choose Snape and Charlie. This is a great story and I love reading it. Keep up the awesome work.

Loving the story. It seems to be a creature harry story unlike any i have read so far. (i have read at least a hundred no exaggeration) You really have me intrigued. Now you mentioned in your author notes mandatory voting well the results seem to be much better than what we have here in Canada. Waaayyy too much corruption due to voter apathy. About them banning cartwheels soon they will ban paper because kids might get a paper cut not to mention stairs. Lets ban stairs since some kid will trip and fall, ooh no can't go on a field trip the bus might get in an accident. Lets just wrap the kids in bubble wrap with a safety helmet and goggles strap them in wheel chairs and push them everywhere because heaven forbid they crash into another in the halls and get a bruise.. Ridiculous... and honestly legislation needs to be put in place to halt the policy makers from straddling out kids so much that they loose out on opportunities like i did. No rock climbing gym trips, no gymnastics on bars because its too dangerous and i will never forget being forced to wear safety glasses while sewing because some stupid girl ran over a pin broke the needle had it go into her eye and sued the Ontario school board and won. For generations kids have been taught how to sew. That was a first. Sad.

Anyway sorry about my rant but the prompt just couldn't be ignored, Anyway sorry Love the story so far and i sincerely hope that it will be completed or complete. The visual descriptions you give in the story are so vivid that ixcan literally follow the story with a movie going on in my head that is so far as good if not better than an hp movie.
Thanks soon much for the story.
L

I vote for Snape and Nathaniel.... though there is also Charlie... but since I can only vote for 2 then Snape and Nathaniel.

Please update chapter 12 soon ^_^

I want Snape as a mate... Definitely!!!