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for Dark Knight

by xDAISUKIx

schedule February 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Really liking your story. I never read dominant Harry fics. They aren't enjoyable for me at all, but your story just grabbed me. and I love it! Keep up the great work.
person XTakesheX
schedule February 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooooohhhhh. Harry and Draco imfirmary scene XD. Cant wait!!!!!! So you must update today >.<
person wednesdaay
schedule February 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
...aaaaaand congratulations, you confused me even more now .-.

Nothing much to say, other than "I neeeeeeeeed more @.@"

Gonna go sit on the side and work my confusion out xD

<3 Wednesdaay
person KaylusCHU
schedule February 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That fight scene was... intense. lmao. You were aiming for unconsciousness? WELL. O.O bit of a fail. Anyway, interesting teaser, what ARE they going to do in there? :P

person laceyp
schedule February 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i really hope that this next chapter will be up really soon i can't wait to read it im so excited i can't wait to see what happends with harry and draco in the infermory
person laceyp
schedule February 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
please hurry and update please i wwant to see wat happens
person SP777
schedule February 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #15...

Well, I've FINALLY caught up with this story, due to work & all, but I have
to say I truly like this and I mostly avoid the 'threesome' section, doesn't
appeal to me much [so sayth the person who didn't think they would ever read
yaoi]. But, I gave this a shot and I have to say it's entertaining, with subtle
humor [yours] mixed in with the badassness of Harry.

Yes, I said badassness...

I have to say that next in line for the throne...Wilheim[?]...is a complete coward.
To wait until the battle is almost through, THEN fight the strongest when they are at
their weakest? That's not being smart, you're just taking advantage of the situation because
you know you can't do any better.

Look forward to the day Harry puts that arse in its place. :-)

Anyway, I'll be keeping an eye out for this.
schedule January 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh god. That teaser you left at the bottom of the page was ABSOLUTELY EVIL.

Why the 'and Draco...?"

ARRRGHHHHH!!! That made me sit up straight on my seat and drool about the next chapter. Especially they've still got the first confrontation after the 'KISS' lined up. Hehehehehe. I wonder how that will go. <3

Whats the deal with the person in the first part of this chap? Will she/he be important?

Your descriptions are very nice, and though im not very fond of actions scenes myself, i found myself not falling asleep during halfway :P/ It's pretty descriptive and i liked it :P.

I agree with one of the previous reviewers, your writing style isn't 'soft', therefore it makes everything much more vivid and exciting.

Next chapter? >.<
schedule January 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Whats the deal with the person in the first part of this chap? Will she/he be important?

Your descriptions are very nice, and though im not very fond of actions scenes myself, i found myself not falling asleep during halfway :P/ It's pretty descriptive and i liked it :P.

I agree with one of the previous reviewers, your writing style isn't 'soft', therefore it makes everything much more vivid and exciting.

Next chapter? >.<
person Jan
schedule January 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
My mom always told me that if I have nothing good to say, to not say nothing at all, so all I'll say is, please update chapter 16 soon.